~~"Kyun Itna Tadpati Ho"~~by Mann

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Kyun Inn Palon Ko Intzaar Ke Saye Me Bita-ti Ho,
Aa Jao Lipat Jao Mujhse Kyun Itna Tad-pati Ho,

Jo Saja Liya Hai Ang Ang Ko, Aab Tum Ise Kyun Chupati Ho,
DULHAN Ho Tum Meri, Phir Googant Kyun Nahi Uthati Ho,

Ab Ishq Ki Raahon Se Juda Koun Tumhe Hone Dega,
Har Pal Ham Honge Sath, Tum Kyun Ghabrati Ho,

Sine Ki Bekarari, Dahake Labo Se Kab Mujhe Jalaogi,
Gar Bekarari Ki Inteha Hai, To Kyun Nahi Chali Aati Ho..

~~*Mann*~~

Mann This is a gift for u..i like ur written these lines so much, so i designed them and post here..

Hope u like ur gift..

Thanx

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2009, 07:00:59 PM »
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Koi jawaab nahin in lafzon mein bayan ki hui mohabbat ka...Mann ji..Kya khoob likha hai aapne..
Aur Shally ji ne to jaise isko sajaa kar is par chaar chand laga diya... Clapping Smiley
MashaAllah....
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2009, 08:57:47 PM »
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Shally Dear.. Bahut Hi Pyaara Gift Diya Hai Tune Mujhe..!! Yeh Lines Waqai Mere Dil Ke Bahut Qareeb Hain..!! aur In Alfaazon ko Tune Inti Sunderta se Pesh Kiya Hai Ki Basssssssss....!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Meri Likhi Yeh Choti si Poem Tujhe Kahan Mili.. Tune Kahan se dhooondi Main Yeh Nahi Jaanta.. Par Isme Chupi Dosti, tera Pyaar waqai Dil Ko Chhoo gaya..!! tu Meri Bahut PYaari dost Hai..!! Main tere Is Pyaare Se Tohfe Ko Kabhi Nahi Bhoolunga..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft Usual Smile


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shallly...!!  Thankyou ! Thankyou !


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2009, 09:09:38 PM »
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so sweet! kya baat hai!

rub aap dono ki dosti yunhi barkaraar rahkke, sada! ameen

waise, shally aur mann bhai, aap dono yoindia k subse pyaare members hain! ek mera bahot kareebi bhai, ek bahot pyaari behan.... I love you both with all my heart!

yunhi rehna, ka b mat badalna, plz!

luv u guys
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2009, 09:16:58 PM »
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Kyun Inn Palon Ko Intzaar Ke Saye Me Bita-ti Ho,
Aa Jao Lipat Jao Mujhse Kyun Itna Tad-pati Ho,

Jo Saja Liya Hai Ang Ang Ko, Aab Tum Ise Kyun Chupati Ho,
DULHAN Ho Tum Meri, Phir Googant Kyun Nahi Uthati Ho,

Ab Ishq Ki Raahon Se Juda Koun Tumhe Hone Dega,
Har Pal Ham Honge Sath, Tum Kyun Ghabrati Ho,

Sine Ki Bekarari, Dahake Labo Se Kab Mujhe Jalaogi,
Gar Bekarari Ki Inteha Hai, To Kyun Nahi Chali Aati Ho..

~~*Mann*~~

Mann This is a gift for u..i like ur written these lines so much, so i designed them and post here..

Hope u like ur gift..

Thanx

Shally.


bhut khoobsurat ehsasaat mann well said, nd nice work shally ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2009, 10:02:06 PM »
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Beautifully written Mann.. Tum to hamesha hi achha likhte ho, par tumhare alfazon mein jaise shally ne jaan daal di ho...

Really very beautiful gift.. God bless...
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2009, 01:07:22 AM »
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MashAllah kya tofa diya hai Shally tumne Vikas bhai ko...Dosti salamaat rahe aap dono ki Ameen...Ohh by they way very well written Vikas bhaijan..:Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2009, 10:17:31 AM »
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Koi jawaab nahin in lafzon mein bayan ki hui mohabbat ka...Mann ji..Kya khoob likha hai aapne..
Aur Shally ji ne to jaise isko sajaa kar is par chaar chand laga diya... Clapping Smiley
MashaAllah....
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Shukriya Ahamad Bhai.. aapki is Khubsoorat Taareef Ke Liye.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
Yeh to Shally Ka Kamaal hai.. Jo In Lines Ko Itna Khubsoorat Bana diya..  icon_flower


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2009, 10:53:07 AM »
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Wow Shally ji and Mann ji,mindblwing,very beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4 :thumbup:excellent.
Dua hai ki aap doo ke dosti aise hi bani rahe.
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2009, 03:21:14 PM »
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Koi jawaab nahin in lafzon mein bayan ki hui mohabbat ka...Mann ji..Kya khoob likha hai aapne..
Aur Shally ji ne to jaise isko sajaa kar is par chaar chand laga diya... Clapping Smiley
MashaAllah....
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Shukriya SS Ji, Bilkul sahi farmaya aapne, Mann ji ke alfaazo me mohabbat hi mohabbat hai..bahut khoob likhte hai Mann Sahib..

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2009, 03:23:18 PM »
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Shally Dear.. Bahut Hi Pyaara Gift Diya Hai Tune Mujhe..!! Yeh Lines Waqai Mere Dil Ke Bahut Qareeb Hain..!! aur In Alfaazon ko Tune Inti Sunderta se Pesh Kiya Hai Ki Basssssssss....!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Meri Likhi Yeh Choti si Poem Tujhe Kahan Mili.. Tune Kahan se dhooondi Main Yeh Nahi Jaanta.. Par Isme Chupi Dosti, tera Pyaar waqai Dil Ko Chhoo gaya..!! tu Meri Bahut PYaari dost Hai..!! Main tere Is Pyaare Se Tohfe Ko Kabhi Nahi Bhoolunga..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft Usual Smile


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shallly...!!  Thankyou ! Thankyou !


**~** Mann **~**


Shukriya Mann Ji, Bhaut khusi hui ye dekhkar ki aapko meri mehnat kabool hui, Bass dil me aaya ki apne dost ko kyun na ek aisa tohfa diya jaaye jo uske hi kalam se likha ho, aur uske dil ke karib ho, par shayad puraane panno me kahiin reh gaya ho, so inn lines ko pesh kar diya aapke samne...

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2009, 03:24:27 PM »
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so sweet! kya baat hai!

rub aap dono ki dosti yunhi barkaraar rahkke, sada! ameen

waise, shally aur mann bhai, aap dono yoindia k subse pyaare members hain! ek mera bahot kareebi bhai, ek bahot pyaari behan.... I love you both with all my heart!

yunhi rehna, ka b mat badalna, plz!

luv u guys

Shukriya Anjaani Friend,

Aapne hamare kaam ko saraha aur dua di bahut hi aacha laga, aur aap bhi hamare liye bahut aziz dost ho,,

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2009, 04:06:55 PM »
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wah wah wah wah dear Shally ji........bahut hi khubsurti se Mann ji ye alfaaj likhe hai...aur aapne in alfajon ki khubsurti me chaar-chand lga diye hai...
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              Dua hai dosti ka rang sada kayam rahe
              Is mehfil me yu hi pyar anmol barsta rahe.... Usual Smile Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2009, 04:21:09 PM »
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bhut khoobsurat ehsasaat mann well said, nd nice work shally ji

Shukriya Aaina ji, Iss thread ko padne aur sarahne ke liye..

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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2009, 04:22:37 PM »
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Beautifully written Mann.. Tum to hamesha hi achha likhte ho, par tumhare alfazon mein jaise shally ne jaan daal di ho...

Really very beautiful gift.. God bless...


Thanx didi, sach kaha aapne Mann ji khumar-e-ishq me bahut hi khoob likhte hai, didi jaan maine nahi Mann Ji ke alfaazo ne uss dulhan ki tasveer me daal di hai..!!

Shally.
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