Leykin, tum yaheen ho!

by abdbundeli on August 09, 2008, 08:10:31 AM
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'Nabi farma gaye hain: tum har kaheen ho!
 Kaheen ho, yaa naheen? Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

       Parindoun ki sadaa mein mouzood ho tum!
       Waqt ki har adaa mein mouzood ho tum!
       Justjoo ki talab tah-e-nigaah ho: to,    
       Kadaa ho, maykadaa ho, mouzood ho tum!!
Khojaney ko, khojataa hoon tumhain mein bhii!
Khojtey hain yaar!! Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

       Paas ho, fir paas kyoun aatey naheen tum?
       Deed hai, to nazar kyoun aatey naheen tum?
       Hamaaree yeh nisbateyn hain kis tarah keen:
       Iltijaayen karoon, par aatey naheen tum?
Kyaa tamaashaa hai? Samajh paataa naheen mein!
Mujhey shak hai; Yaar! Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

        Mujhey lagtaa kabhee, saaqee baney ho tum;
        To kabhee, naaseh paakee baney ho tum!
        Takhliyah hoon: chhorh peechhey gaye ho tum:
        Aakhiree gamkhwaar baaqee baney ho tum!!
Beykhudee mein, tumhain paataa hoon bagal mein!
Door hai har dwaar; Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

                     ******
                                      - abd bundeli

       
       

 
 
   
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2008, 08:31:02 AM »
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Wow.... bahut achha likha hai abd bundeli ji.. I specially liked these lines.. Usual Smile

Paas ho, fir paas kyoun aatey naheen tum?
       Deed hai, to nazar kyoun aatey naheen tum?
       Hamaaree yeh nisbateyn hain kis tarah keen:
       Iltijaayen karoon, par aatey naheen tum?
Kyaa tamaashaa hai? Samajh paataa naheen mein!
Mujhey shak hai; Yaar! Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2008, 08:53:23 AM »
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bohat khoob  Applause
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Muhammed
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2008, 04:02:18 AM »
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'Nabi farma gaye hain: tum har kaheen ho!
 Kaheen ho, yaa naheen? Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

       Khojaney ko, khojataa hoon tumhain mein bhii!
Khojtey hain yaar!! Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

       Kyaa tamaashaa hai? Samajh paataa naheen mein!
Mujhey shak hai; Yaar! Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

       Beykhudee mein, tumhain paataa hoon bagal mein!
Door hai har dwaar; Leykin, tum yaheen ho!!

                     ******
                                      - abd bundeli

abd babu....100 % Meri shariyat k Khilaaf Lafz paaye gaye Hai aap k..
Pahele aap Tashreeh Kigiye..upar jo lines hai uski.
Baaki Jawaab Baad Me Deta Hun Tafsir se.
yaar kuch to socha kigiye.
aub aapki galati kahaan hai wo bhi dikhaoonga....
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2008, 06:45:25 AM »
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Muhammed sa'b,
Meyree samajh mein naheen aayaa, ki, meiney koun sey 'shabd' aapki shariyat key khilaaf likhey hain! Meiney LLB kartey waqt  apney is 'saarey jahaan sey achchhey' Hindustaan mein laagoo 'Mohammden Law' ki padhaayee ki thee, aur mein jitnee shariyat usmein moujood hai, utnee hi padhee hai; baaqee ki jaankaaree mujhey naheen hai!
Meyree is nazm ka ma'aanee seedhaa-saadhaa hai:
'Nabi(representatives of God)have spoken/declared that YOU are OMNI-PRESENT! But, I (being a common man) know that YOU are certainly PRESENT over here; though (As my perception is not that wide, naturally I can't percieve beyond my small limits.) I know not whether YOU are PRESENT every-where or not.'
I'm sorry, I know not, how this stands against your shariyat?
I'm sure, you'll read the other lines of the poem in this very light only.
Interestingly 'natural' and 'sajid_ghayel' have not found any thing otherwise in the poem! And, dear friend, what the poets compose, also comes only from HIM, as HE is equally present in their souls as well. Lets not drag religions and religion-related matters in this worldly FORUM of poets. Okay?
                                            - abd bundeli

 
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2008, 07:13:48 AM »
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LLb wala Law To...0.001 % bhi pura nahi hai.
aur sajid_ghayal ji ki Nazre kahaan Taq dekhti hai wo muje maloom nahi
aur aapka Thread ya Forum aapko mubaaraq

Faarsi k ala soofi shayar Hazrat-e-Saadi sirazi Ki bat pe khatam karta hun
Be haya baash k baad
Har che Khwahi Kun.......



 
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2008, 07:36:56 AM »
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Muhammed  sa'b,
You're doubtlessly a wonderful person. Lets limit the religions to our personal selves, and look at the literature as literary persons, to enjoy it to its very core, distancing our selves from all kinds of bias or didactism, as literature is literature!
                                           - abd bundeli
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