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MERA MAHBOOB THA VO
BADA HI KHOOB THA VO
BHOOLNA MUSHKIL HAI
MERA VAJOOD THA VO
MAI JAHA .N KAHTI THI
VAHI JAATA THAA VO
PYAR KARTA THA MUJHE
BADA BHAATA THA VO
JAMEE.N PE USKI NAJAR
NA UTHATA THA VO
MAI BAHAK JAATI THI
NA BAHAKTA THA VO
MAI SATATI THI USE
KUCH NA KAHTA THA VO
SHARM SE CHEHRA JHUKA
BHAAG JAATA THA VO
RAAT KO SAPNO ME
MERE AATA THA VO
DIL KI BAATE APNI
SAB BATATA THA VO
MERI GALTI KI SAZAA
DE GAYA HAI MUJHE VO
ROOTH KAR VO MUJHSE
KHO GAYA HAI AB VO
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2011, 03:07:11 PM » |
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कोमल भावनाएं| सुन्दर शब्द-चयन | अच्छा प्रयास|
शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र .
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2011, 03:14:41 PM » |
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Kitni maasoomiyat bhari hai puri nazm mein.mkv saheb bahut khoob kaha hai.Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2011, 03:49:38 PM » |
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bht ache MKV ji-- bht pyari nazm  hum dua krte hain ki aapka vo pyara mehboob maan jaye aur aap fir se bahak jaya karen khus rahen muskurate rahen |
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2011, 02:40:53 AM » |
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bahut khub MKV ji...
Shad o aabad rahiye...
Shihab
Shukriya shihab ji |
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2011, 03:32:06 AM » |
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BAhut Khoob MKV ji Bahut Hi Sunder Ehsas
Daaaaaaaaaaaaad JAnab Dil Seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2011, 06:55:18 AM » |
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Dhanyavaad Arun Sir Sab aapki sundar rachnaao.n ki vajah se hai.. |
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2011, 07:31:18 AM » |
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Bahot sundar
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2011, 08:37:32 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2011, 11:08:21 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2011, 12:40:12 AM » |
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PYARA KALAAM WAHHHHHHHHHHH.ASGHAR
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2011, 06:29:17 AM » |
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bht ache MKV ji-- bht pyari nazm hum dua krte hain ki aapka vo pyara mehboob maan jaye aur aap fir se bahak jaya karen khus rahen muskurate rahen Shukriya sarfira ji |
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