-----/// Main koshish kar raha hoon /// -----

by ~Hriday~ on October 12, 2010, 06:19:36 AM
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aaj main tum me khone ki koshish kar raha hoon,
pyaar me tumhaara hone ki koshish kar raha hoon,

main aaj khud ko badalne ki koshish kar raha hoon,
jaisa main tha waise hone ki koshish kar raha hoon,

aaj mai fir se kisi ko chaahne ki koshish kar raha hoon,
kisi ko mohabbat se apna banaane ki koshish kar raha hoon,

maaloom hai mujhe ki main galat hoon par sach hai ye bhi,
apne har galti ko chhod tumhe paane ki koshish kar raha hoon,

main tumhaare aankhon me gum ho jaane ki koshish kar raha hoon,
tumhaara hoke main ab duniya bhulaane ki koshish kar raha hoon,

haan sach, aaj main fir se insaan banne ki koshish kar raha hoon,
main jaisa tha kabhi waisa banne ki fir ek koshish kar raha hoon,

haan main koshish kar raha hoon,
haan main koshish kar raha hoon....


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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 06:26:58 AM »
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badhiya he kapil jiiii...bahut khoob likha he apne badhiya bahut badhiyaaa...dheer sari daad`
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 06:33:13 AM »
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hmmmmmmmmmm....hope aapki koshish kaamyaab ho jayeeeee
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 06:38:46 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 12:55:41 PM »
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thank you so much Kasak ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 01:10:42 PM »
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Dua hai meri ye koshish kaamyaab ho
Jise tu chahe wo sirf tere hi naam ho

Har lamha beete tera bas use hi chahte
Tu na dekhe kisiko bas uska hi yaar ho

Unn nashili aankhon me tere liye sirf pyaar ho
Jin pe mar mita tu wo bhi tera deewana waar ho

Har lamha tum jiyo uske pyaar me khokar
Zindagi ki subah aur shaam uske sath ho

Leke hathon me hath tumhari  dil ki baat ho
Pyaar me sanwri zindagi ki har raat ho

Haan dua hai meri k ye koshish kaamyaab ho
Aur meri bhi ye dua kubul mere Khuda mere Sirtaaj ho...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2010, 09:31:24 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji for your best wishes... main aap ka dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon... aur bahut bahut khoobsurti se aapne apna message diya hai.. thank you so so so so much.. main iske jawaab me kuch likh nahi paayaa... ye to duwaayen hain na mere liye ab iska koi jawaab thode na hota hai... ye to bas poori hoti hain.. aur aapke kehte hi mujhe mehsoos hua ki jaise poori ho gayi.... thanks again....!!!
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