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Ho raha hai jo dil mein honey do ab
Mat roko mujhe tum mein khoney do ab
Kab se sookha padaa tha banjar ye dil
Beej mujhko wafaa ke boney do ab
Neend aatee nahee hai main kya karoon
Gaao tum loriyan mujhko soney do ab
Tum to aate nahi aansoo aa jaate hai
Dil nahee maanta mujhko roney do ab
Main karoonga poorey vaadey sabhee
Bhaar kitnaa bhi ho mujhko dhoney do ab
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2012, 12:43:21 PM » |
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Ho raha hai jo dil mein honey do ab
Mat roko mujhe tujhme khoney do ab
Kab se sookha padaa tha banjar ye dil
Beej mujhko wafaa ke boney do ab
Neend aatee nahee hai main kya karoon
Gaao tum loriyan mujhko soney do ab
Tum to aate nahi aansoo aa jaate hai
Dil nahee maanta mujhko roney do ab
Main karoonga poorey vaadey sabhee
Bhaar kitnaa bhi ho mujhko dhoney do ab
Jabardast ..... Likha hai mkv ji........ Maja aa gaya..... Hume bhi sikhaye janab kuch aisa hi.....  |
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2012, 02:48:05 PM » |
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laajwaab behtreen dilkash shaandaar damdaar ese saare adjectives qurbaan khush raho
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2012, 03:47:01 PM » |
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bahut khoob bhai MKV ji.Bahut achha kalaam pesh kiya hai.'Neend aati nahi ....'ye wala sher khoob raha.Dili mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2012, 04:48:16 AM » |
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wowww waahh mkvji.....kya khoob likha hai aapne....bhaar dhone do ab.....badiya....  ..... |
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2012, 12:37:42 AM » |
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Bahut khoob thanks a lot khwaish ji bas isi tarah pyar dete rahiye. |
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2012, 02:16:04 AM » |
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Ho raha hai jo dil mein honey do ab
Mat roko mujhe tujhme khoney do ab
Kab se sookha padaa tha banjar ye dil
Beej mujhko wafaa ke boney do ab
Neend aatee nahee hai main kya karoon
Gaao tum loriyan mujhko soney do ab
Tum to aate nahi aansoo aa jaate hai
Dil nahee maanta mujhko roney do ab
Main karoonga poorey vaadey sabhee
Bhaar kitnaa bhi ho mujhko dhoney do ab
dil ko chu lene wali peshkash nice |
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2012, 08:35:42 AM » |
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Bahut hi khoobsurat khyaal mkv sahab!!
Daad kabool kare.n...
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