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Rishi Soumya
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This is the first ever time I have written a love poem..Wanted to share it with all of you..Hope u like it...
Dua karti thi har din har raat
Koi shehzada aayega
Aur mere is suni jeevan main
Pyar bhar dega
Yakin nahi hota
Mere sapno ka shehzada mere paas aa gaya....
Banayega mujhe apni dulhan
Yeh wada karta hai
Mujhe hamesha khush rakhega
ye vishwas dilata hai
Kya yehi hai woh
Jiska mujhe intezaar tha
Kya yehi hai woh
Jo sapno main aata jaata tha
Pyar kar baithi hoon main
Uski baaton se
Uski muskaan se
Uski har ek ada se
Deewana bana gaya hai woh mujhe
Pata nahi lekin usko
Bas ab to yehi ek wada hai use
Saath nibhaungi jeevan bhar
Saath rahoongi har mod par
Khushiyon se tumhare jeevan main ujala laungi
Agar koi dukh aaya to ek hi ghoot main pi jaungi
Chahe tum yakin karo na karo
Par main tumse pyar karti hoon
tumhare yaadon main khoi rehti hoon
Tumhara intezaar rehta hai
Tumse milne ka man karta hai
Kab aayega woh shezada
Aur apni shehzadi ko
Apne saath le jayega
Bas ab to...
Us pal ka intezaar hai
us ghadi ka intezaar hai
Us waqt ka intezaar hai
Us din ka intezaar hai
Bas tumhara intezaar hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2006, 08:43:50 AM » |
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aap kahin meri baat to nahin kar rahin??? :oops:  :wink: |
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nirbhay
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2006, 10:48:50 AM » |
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Very nice Rishi.. Keep writing!
You hav a lots of unique quality of writing.
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2006, 11:34:42 AM » |
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bahut khoob Rishi...........
jab jab koi papeeha pyaar ki boli gaayega
teri aankho mein koi sapana sa saj jaayega
jhum uthega tera dil kisi ke aane se
ek sundar sa sajana tere sang preet ke geet gaayega
har taraf saj jaayegi tere sapano ki tasveere
teri aankho ko koi satarnge khawab de jaayega
bhar lega jab woh tujh ko apni bahaon mein
tere aankho mein ek laaj ka pehra sa chhaa jaayega
woh le jaaega tujhe sang apne kahi pariyo.n ke desh mein
tera sehzada bas ab jaldi hi tujhse milne aayega :D :D
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nirbhay
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2006, 12:14:50 PM » |
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Wah wah ! Kya baat hai... Bohat Hi aache Ranju Maa... =D>
Yoon Aahista se sapne Ye Sajaa gaya Koun
Dast-e-veeran mein Pyar ki roshni jalaa gaya Koun
Ye Dulhan ka Libaas se tujhe sajaa gaya Koun
Khush faimi ka Vishwash ye jaagaa gaya Koun
Khatam karne Intezar ka Safar, manzil mein aagaya Koun
Sapno ko badal kar haQiQat mein, tujh par cha gaya Koun
Baaton ke andaaz se ye IshQ ka charaag jala gaya Koun
Apni Muskaan par yoon tujhmein aag laga gaya hai Koun
Sath nibhane ka jeevan ke har mod pe, humsafar aagaya Koun
Dukh ke gulistaan se door laaougi jisse wo shehzada hai Koun
Yaakena.N usko bhi tumpar vishwash hoga
Usko bhi tumhare pyar ka ehsaas hoga
Tumhare iss masoom se khayalaat se Door jayega Koun
Na bach payein hain zamane bhar mein koi, IshQ se bach payega Koun ?
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2006, 06:03:26 PM » |
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wonderful neer ....too good....... :D
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2006, 03:59:50 AM » |
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aap kahin meri baat to nahin kar rahin??? :oops: :wink: Are baap re...main itni sahas kaise kar sakti hoon.........  |
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2006, 04:00:43 AM » |
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Very nice Rishi.. Keep writing!
You hav a lots of unique quality of writing. thanku ji....I will surely write some more... :razz: |
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2006, 04:01:40 AM » |
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bahut khoob Rishi...........
jab jab koi papeeha pyaar ki boli gaayega
teri aankho mein koi sapana sa saj jaayega
jhum uthega tera dil kisi ke aane se
ek sundar sa sajana tere sang preet ke geet gaayega
har taraf saj jaayegi tere sapano ki tasveere
teri aankho ko koi satarnge khawab de jaayega
bhar lega jab woh tujh ko apni bahaon mein
tere aankho mein ek laaj ka pehra sa chhaa jaayega
woh le jaaega tujhe sang apne kahi pariyo.n ke desh mein
tera sehzada bas ab jaldi hi tujhse milne aayega :D :D Wow ranjana...Thats so sweet..Just lovely... |
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2006, 04:02:51 AM » |
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Wah wah ! Kya baat hai... Bohat Hi aache Ranju Maa... =D>
Yoon Aahista se sapne Ye Sajaa gaya Koun
Dast-e-veeran mein Pyar ki roshni jalaa gaya Koun
Ye Dulhan ka Libaas se tujhe sajaa gaya Koun
Khush faimi ka Vishwash ye jaagaa gaya Koun
Khatam karne Intezar ka Safar, manzil mein aagaya Koun
Sapno ko badal kar haQiQat mein, tujh par cha gaya Koun
Baaton ke andaaz se ye IshQ ka charaag jala gaya Koun
Apni Muskaan par yoon tujhmein aag laga gaya hai Koun
Sath nibhane ka jeevan ke har mod pe, humsafar aagaya Koun
Dukh ke gulistaan se door laaougi jisse wo shehzada hai Koun
Yaakena.N usko bhi tumpar vishwash hoga
Usko bhi tumhare pyar ka ehsaas hoga
Tumhare iss masoom se khayalaat se Door jayega Koun
Na bach payein hain zamane bhar mein koi, IshQ se bach payega Koun ? neer..ity is a really nice poem..Aapne is kavita se to uski yaad diladi mujhe.. :wink: |
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nirbhay
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2006, 04:41:39 AM » |
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Thankyou! Thankyou!
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2006, 05:40:49 AM » |
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U R always welcome...
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sunny_bunny
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2006, 12:07:36 PM » |
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Gesu
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2006, 12:17:14 PM » |
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This is the first ever time I have written a love poem..Wanted to share it with all of you..Hope you like it...
Dua karti thi har din har raat
Koi shehzada aayega
Aur mere is suni jeevan main
Pyar bhar dega
Yakin nahi hota
Mere sapno ka shehzada mere paas aa gaya....
Banayega mujhe apni dulhan
Yeh wada karta hai
Mujhe hamesha khush rakhega
ye vishwas dilata hai
Kya yehi hai woh
Jiska mujhe intezaar tha
Kya yehi hai woh
Jo sapno main aata jaata tha
Pyar kar baithi hoon main
Uski baaton se
Uski muskaan se
Uski har ek ada se
Deewana bana gaya hai woh mujhe
Pata nahi lekin usko
Bas ab to yehi ek wada hai use
Saath nibhaungi jeevan bhar
Saath rahoongi har mod par
Khushiyon se tumhare jeevan main ujala laungi
Agar koi dukh aaya to ek hi ghoot main pi jaungi
Chahe tum yakin karo na karo
Par main tumse pyar karti hoon
tumhare yaadon main khoi rehti hoon
Tumhara intezaar rehta hai
Tumse milne ka man karta hai
Kab aayega woh shezada
Aur apni shehzadi ko
Apne saath le jayega
Bas ab to...
Us pal ka intezaar hai
us ghadi ka intezaar hai
Us waqt ka intezaar hai
Us din ka intezaar hai
Bas tumhara intezaar hai rishi ji its simply fantastic and keep writing.... :D |
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Gesu
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2006, 12:21:55 PM » |
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wah ranju ji neer ji kya baat hai......
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