mere aas paas baithi tanhaiyan bolti hain

by sunildehgawani on September 22, 2011, 01:42:30 PM
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 bahar labon se aakar khamoshiyan bolti hain
 ankhon main simat aayi madhoshiyan bolti hain

          chand rojon mai hath unke sawar jayenge mehandi mai
          fizaon ki rawanagi se shahnaiyan bolti hain

 baqt najdeek aa gaya hai hoga intkhaab apna
 mere aas paas baithi tanhaiyan bolti hain  
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2011, 05:20:45 PM »
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Sunil Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab ... behad khush sher kahe hai..
Sabhi sher aik se badhkar aik rahe.. Usual Smile

Tahe dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2011, 05:43:31 PM »
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suni1 ji bhut khub 1ikha hai aapne
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2011, 05:55:47 PM »
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bahut khub

 
 bahar labon se aakar khamoshiyan bolti hain
 ankhon main simat aayi madhoshiyan bolti hain

          chand rojon mai hath unke sawar jayenge mehandi mai
          fizaon ki rawanagi se shahnaiyan bolti hain

 baqt najdeek aa gaya hai hoga intkhaab apna
 mere aas paas baithi tanhaiyan bolti hain 
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2011, 06:11:02 PM »
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boht khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2011, 05:30:15 AM »
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aapki tanhaiyan bhi baht kamaal ki bolti hain sahab--
bht bht khub.
daad kubul karen
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2011, 12:14:32 PM »
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tah-e-dil sukriya aapka parwaj sahab,,,,khuda hafiz
Sunil Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab ... behad khush sher kahe hai..
Sabhi sher aik se badhkar aik rahe.. Usual Smile

Tahe dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2011, 12:17:00 PM »
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aggarawal ji ,,,bahut shukriya ,,,ek har sakhs ko inhi lafzon ki jarrurat hoti jo apne kahe hain ,,,,,aapka bahut bahut shukriya ,,,khuda hafiz
suni1 ji bhut khub 1ikha hai aapne
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2011, 12:18:34 PM »
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sahil ji ,,,,thnks...hausla afajai ke liye ,,,
aapki tanhaiyan bhi baht kamaal ki bolti hain sahab--
bht bht khub.
daad kubul karen
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2011, 12:22:05 PM »
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,,sarfira sahab ,,,tah-e-dil adaab ,,,,,aapki gahraiyon ko ,,,hum dekh sakte hain chhu nahi sakte ,,,,bahut jazbati kalam hai aapki,,,,keep writting nevr endings words....khuda hafiz
aapki tanhaiyan bhi baht kamaal ki bolti hain sahab--
bht bht khub.
daad kubul karen
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