~Mere ishq ka asar~

by kritika sharma on September 03, 2010, 07:03:21 PM
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Kaash humare ishq ka us par kuch aisa asar chhaye
wo jaha bhi dekhe use har taraf hum hi najar aaye

wo bhulna bhi chahe hume to na bhul paaye
kash uske jism me hum uski saanso ki tarah utar jaaye

is kadar mehke uska badan humari khusboo se
ki wo khud bhi apni mahak ko bhul ke hum me sama jaaye

kaash mere ishq me us par kuch aisa asar chhaye
ki zindgi bhar ke liye wo meri Rooh me bas jaaye
bas meri rooh me bas jaaye ....

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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 07:22:21 PM »
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Kafi achchi koshish hai aapki.... Kalaam ke ahsaas dilfareb lage hume..... per andaaz e bayaaN kuch kamzor hai.... Likhati rahiye.... Nikhaar aayeNga....

khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez.......Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 07:24:59 PM »
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thanks ji humne to avi hi likha shuru kiya h thank u so much for  ur advice hum koshish karenge acha likhne ki
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 10:57:08 PM »
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Wah Wah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kya baat hai..............

Bhut hi khoob likha hai ............

full of feelings ......... Can feel ur feel ..........

Keep smiling
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2010, 02:50:50 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut achcha likha hai aapne Kritika ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2010, 06:52:50 AM »
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very nice kritika
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