Mohabbat humne ki..

by sudhir_08 on November 20, 2008, 12:41:40 PM
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Mohabbat humne ki jo ek khata ho gayi..
Ek wafa thi aur ab zindagi saza ho gayi..

Wafa karte rahe hum ibadato ki tarha..
Phir ibadat khud ek gunah ho gayi...

Kitna suhana tha safar jab sath the hum..
Phir kiya hua kyu manzil juda ho gayi..

Koi chahat koi hasrat koi umeed nahi rahi..
wo gaya to laga dunia fanah ho gayi…

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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2008, 01:15:57 PM »
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Aap ke is title se apni likhi hui ek shayari yaad aa gayi...phir related posts main wohi nazar aayi !!

Bohot khoob Sudhir Ji Yunhi likhte rahiyega  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2008, 03:17:20 PM »
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Mohabbat humne ki jo ek khata ho gayi..
Ek wafa thi aur ab zindagi saza ho gayi..

Wafa karte rahe hum ibadato ki tarha..
Phir ibadat khud ek gunah ho gayi...

Kitna suhana tha safar jab sath the hum..
Phir kiya hua kyu manzil juda ho gayi..

Koi chahat koi hasrat koi umeed nahi rahi..
wo gaya to laga dunia fanah ho gayi…

 love9

Bohat Khoob Sudhir

Yu to uski har ek aadat ko pehchante the hum
Na Jane kaise unki fitrat bewafa ho gayee.....

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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2008, 03:46:18 PM »
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YOUN TOH LOG HAR KISI KI ADAT KO JANTE THE
LEKIN KAB KOUN KOI KAHA DHOKA DE JAYE
ISKI HAKIKAT ZINDAGI KOI NAHI JAAN PATE THE

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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2008, 12:32:15 AM »
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beautiful poem(s)!
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2008, 10:59:28 AM »
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bahut acha likha ha sunder ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 12:36:20 PM »
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Thank you Celmira ji..

Mohhabat mein thokkar khayi thi humne..
Ye soch kar dil me khata ho gayi..

Girte rahe aansoo palko pe humare..
Najane humse kya gila ho gayi..

Karte hai aaj bhi unse itni MOHABBAT..
Phir bhi kyun unko shikayad ho gayi???

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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2008, 05:36:13 PM »
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nice workk Sudhir!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2008, 05:50:35 PM »
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Nice start with good work Sudhir Ji
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2008, 12:21:27 PM »
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Thank you Pooja ji and Raj Hari ji...


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