Mohabbat Ik Naazuk Si Larki Hai...

by Aryaan on July 29, 2006, 07:53:56 PM
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Tumhein yeh kis ne keh diya aakhir
Keh!
Kisi resturant ke kisi tareek goshey mein
Baith kar madham sargoshiyon mein
Muskurate labon se baat karna
Aur icecream ke cup mein chamach chalaate huwe
Khwahish-e-dil ko zubaan par le aana
Mohabbat hai?

Balkeh mohabbat tau
Door daraaz kisi wehshi Qabeele mein koyi chalaak si devi
Jo tumhari anaa ko apne jaado se yun Qaid karti hai
Keh tum apna saara gham bhool jaate ho
Mohabbat mann ka sacha sauda hai
Jisey..
Bazaar mein baicha nahi karte
Mohabbat ik naazuk si larki hai
Jisey rulaaya nahi karte
Mohabbat ko yun zaya nahi karte
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2006, 10:15:23 PM »
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this is so beautiful! i love the last 5 lines the best...thought the whole thing is superb...so touching yar!
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2006, 10:30:34 PM »
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Bohat Khoob AryaanJi!
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2006, 01:06:53 AM »
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Thanks a lot Sanya & Ravi...
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2006, 01:18:34 AM »
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bahut khoob Aryaan ......mohabbat kya hai ...kuch main bhi in lines mein likhne ki koshish karti hun... :D

jab kabhi koi bhawara kali ko chumata hai
jab yeh sara alam  mehekne lagata hai
 jab bhi koi panchi hawa ko cheerta hai
jab bhi badal bikhar ke bheegne sa lagata hai
raat mein aankhe jinke khawab dekhti hai
subeh fir unki hi tasveer se fir baat karti hai
tab tera hona main mehsus karti hun
kya yehi hi mohabbat hai main aaj tujhse yeh puchti hun!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2006, 02:15:54 AM »
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Bohat shukriya Ranjana, Bohat khubsoorat lines likhi hain aap ne bhi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2006, 07:01:45 AM »
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shukriya Aryaan ..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2006, 07:27:19 AM »
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aryaan aur... ranjana ji aap dono  ne bahut aacha likha hai....
ek kosis humari bhi.

badalon ki ote se jub chand dekhkta hai humein.
sard hawaon ka jhoda jub chedata hai humein.
teri yaadon ki man mein ek ajeeb si jaagti hai.
jaise samander mein koi madmast machli bhaagti hai.
baichain ho jaata hai man usko paas bulao yaaroon
kya yahi ishq hai humko batlaaoo yaaroon.
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2006, 07:35:43 AM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji.....shukriya .. Usual Smile

kabhi yun hi bethe bethe dil dharak sa jaata hai
naam unka baar baar hamare labo per aata hai
kho jaate hain hum yun hi unke tasvur mein
aur yun hi koi awara hawa sa jhonka
badan mein sihran si bhar jaata hai
dil karta hai ki woh samet le apni bahaon mein
aur keh de kaano mein koi meethi si baat
kya yahi hota hai mohabaat karne walo ka haal
kya yahi hota hai jise sab kehte hain pyaar ...??
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2006, 07:49:02 AM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji.....shukriya .. Usual Smile

kabhi yun hi bethe bethe dil dharak sa jaata hai
naam unka baar baar hamare labo per aata hai
kho jaate hain hum yun hi unke tasvur mein
aur yun hi koi awara hawa sa jhonka
badan mein sihran si bhar jaata hai
dil karta hai ki woh samet le apni bahaon mein
aur keh de kaano mein koi meethi si baat
kya yahi hota hai mohabaat karne walo ka haal
kya yahi hota hai jise sab kehte hain pyaar ...??


bahut badiya ranjana ji..

koi kuch bhi keh na de aaj unki shaan mein,
her gum gawara hai humein unki ek muskaan mein
ek baar dil kyn unki justjoo chahta hai,
her roz fariyaadon mein kyn unko maangta hai.
per saamne jaana kyn is dil ko duswaar hota hai.
dharakta hai ye dil kyn? kya yahi pyaar hota hai.
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2006, 07:49:28 AM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji.....shukriya .. Usual Smile

kabhi yun hi bethe bethe dil dharak sa jaata hai
naam unka baar baar hamare labo per aata hai
kho jaate hain hum yun hi unke tasvur mein
aur yun hi koi awara hawa sa jhonka
badan mein sihran si bhar jaata hai
dil karta hai ki woh samet le apni bahaon mein
aur keh de kaano mein koi meethi si baat
kya yahi hota hai mohabaat karne walo ka haal
kya yahi hota hai jise sab kehte hain pyaar ...??


bahut badiya ranjana ji..

koi kuch bhi keh na de aaj unki shaan mein,
her gum gawara hai humein unki ek muskaan mein
ek baar dil kyn unki justjoo chahta hai,
her roz fariyaadon mein kyn unko maangta hai.
per saamne jaana kyn is dil ko duswaar hota hai.
dharakta hai ye dil kyn? kya yahi pyaar hota hai.
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2006, 10:53:52 AM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji.....


ek beqarari si chhaa jaati hai
bas tanhaai hi dil ko bhaati hai
dil aksar udas sa ho jaata hai
kya karte honge woh?bas yahi khayal dil mein aata hai
kabhi unko dekh le achank se toh dil dharak sa jaata hai
lab hote hain khamosh aur dil nazaro se baat kar aata hai
ek meetha meetha sa dard har waqt khumar sa ban kasak jagata hai
kya yahi hota hai pyaar...............................Huh?Huh??
zamaana toh pyaar karne walo ka yahi haal batata hai
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«Reply #12 on: July 30, 2006, 12:38:46 PM »
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simply gr8 Aryaan ji, Ranjana di n Bhondo ji...
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«Reply #13 on: July 30, 2006, 01:03:32 PM »
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bahut khoob kavi ji.....


ek beqarari si chhaa jaati hai
bas tanhaai hi dil ko bhaati hai
dil aksar udas sa ho jaata hai
kya karte honge woh?bas yahi khayal dil mein aata hai
kabhi unko dekh le achank se toh dil dharak sa jaata hai
lab hote hain khamosh aur dil nazaro se baat kar aata hai
ek meetha meetha sa dard har waqt khumar sa ban kasak jagata hai
kya yahi hota hai pyaar...............................Huh?Huh??
zamaana toh pyaar karne walo ka yahi haal batata hai


bahut aache ranjana ji...

bas uske ek deedar ke liye pagal sa hona.
chup chap bithna, usay yaad kerna aur... rona.

aapne khoon se usko chitthiyan dena.
uske sare dukho ko aapne per lena.

ussay gussa hona aur... usay manana.
uske liye kai dino tak bhookha reh jaana.

uske liye bhondu aaj bhi aapna wajood khota hai.
mujhe batao ki to kya yahi pyaar hota hai
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«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2006, 01:04:29 PM »
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thank you nikki ji... aap bhi kuch likhiye.
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