***muddat se intezar thi***,,,,,,,,,,Tanowar

by Tanowar Jahan on March 27, 2012, 03:14:36 PM
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muddat se interzar thi jis shaam ki,
                                                  ke tanha dil ho,or bechain ho tanhai,
                                                  ke tum mere itne pass ho, jaise koi ho
                                                  zannat ka nazara ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


                                                  shaam dhalne lagi hai,or raat ka
                                                  chahadne laga hai khumaar,darr hai
                                                  ki raat ke aagosh me kahin behak na
                                                  jaye mann hamara,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
                 
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2012, 03:28:19 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley massssttttt Tanowar ji... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... kuch likhe bina raha nahi gaya aapke is post ko padh ke... kuch din se nikla to bas keyboard pe ungliyaan chalaa di...

na roko khud ko tum ki aaj behek jaane do,
apni deewaangi ho hadd se guzar jaane do,
ye lamha aaya hai barso ke intezaar ke baad,
meri baahon me aake khud ko bikhar jaane do,

chhoo lene do naazuk hothon ko mere hothon se,
apni julfon ke andheron me mujhe kho jaane do,
kuch karo aisa ki is raat ki subah na ho paaye,
aur mujhe tum apni baahon me hi mar jaane do...

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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2012, 03:36:38 PM »
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bhut khub hriday ji Applause Applause Applause
   kya kahu,,,,, bas itna lagata hai ke apko meri sher-o-shayari ka intezar reheta hai,,,,,,,,, aur apka reply to mashallh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

    bas isi tarha likhete rahe,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2012, 03:42:58 PM »
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Ji jhoot nahi bolunga ki aapki sher-o-shayari ka mujhe intezaar rehta hai... par haan aapke likhe huye sher padh ke apne aap kuch likhne ka mann kar jaata hai.. to bas likh lete hain... aapko pasand aaya iski mujhe khushi hai... maine is post ka poora version abhi main queue me post kiya hai... padh lijiyega.....!!! and thanks again...!!!

bhut khub hriday ji Applause Applause Applause
   kya kahu,,,,, bas itna lagata hai ke apko meri sher-o-shayari ka intezar reheta hai,,,,,,,,, aur apka reply to mashallh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

    bas isi tarha likhete rahe,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 04:05:05 AM »
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