-----/// Mujhe mohabbat hai tumse /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 03, 2012, 04:48:52 PM
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aankho me jo chehra hai main dikhaaun kaise,
mujhe kiska intezaar hai main bataaun kaise,

dil me jo mere shor hai main dabaaun kaise,
dhadkano ki awaaz main tumhe sunaaun kaise,

dil me jo bhi baat hai main chhupaaun kaise,
mujhe mohabbat hai tumse main bataaun kaise

tum mere paas ho ke bhi mere paas nahi ho,
apne is duuri ka dard tumhe samjhaaun kaise,

chaahun to tumhe khinch ke seene se laga lun,
par khud me aisi himmat aaj main laaun kaise...


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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 07:31:58 PM »
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oye hoye bhaya--ki gal hai ji--
waah waah--
bht bht khoob khumaar ki udhedbun hai Usual Smile
daad daad daad
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 03:41:56 AM »
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Hriday ji bahut pyaaree aue muqammal ghazal hai.badhaai ho bas akhiree sher ko teesre number par khiskaa de.kyonki ye bhee matle kaa sher hai saare matle ek hee seiol men hone chahiye is tarah aapkee ghazal men teen matle ho jaayenge. baaqee aap khu samajhdaar hain. namaste
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 05:18:20 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob hridayji....daad...
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2012, 12:57:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sarfira ji.... !!!

oye hoye bhaya--ki gal hai ji--
waah waah--
bht bht khoob khumaar ki udhedbun hai Usual Smile
daad daad daad
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2012, 06:27:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shihab ji....!!!

bahut bahut khub Hriday ji Applause

Shad o aabaad rahiye

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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2012, 04:48:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji... bahut achcha laga jo aapne mere is ghazal ko ek naya aur sahi roop diya... maine aapke suggestions ko maante huye adjustment kar liya hai... thank you sooo much....!!!

Hriday ji bahut pyaaree aue muqammal ghazal hai.badhaai ho bas akhiree sher ko teesre number par khiskaa de.kyonki ye bhee matle kaa sher hai saare matle ek hee seiol men hone chahiye is tarah aapkee ghazal men teen matle ho jaayenge. baaqee aap khu samajhdaar hain. namaste
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 12:11:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

bahut bahut khoob hridayji....daad...
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2012, 12:27:08 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2012, 05:29:06 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Anahita ji....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2012, 03:22:35 PM »
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Bahut khoob ap ki izazat ho to 2 shabd mayri aur say
"chanchal nadiyu ko behnay do
kuch ankho ko bhi kehnay do"
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2012, 07:08:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sushil ji.... aapne bhi khoob likha hai....!!!

Bahut khoob ap ki izazat ho to 2 shabd mayri aur say
"chanchal nadiyu ko behnay do
kuch ankho ko bhi kehnay do"
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