-----/// Tumse mohabbat nahi hai ///----- Hriday

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naa... mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi hai
koi apnaa saa rishtaa nahi hai
bas ek sapnaa thaa jo tut gayaa
iske siwaa kuch bhi nahi hai....

kuch pal zindagi ke.. khoobsurat se..
jo tumne diye the mujhe kabhi...
bas.. un palon ki thodi si yaadein hain
aur iske siwaa kuch bhi nahi hai...

main ab tumhe yaad nahi kartaa...
nahi sochtaa main tumhaare baare mein..
yunhi kabhi chalte firte
koi chehraa tumsa dikh jaataa hai to
thodi si yaad tumhaari aa jaati hai...

kho jaataa hoon main kuch pal un yaadon me
achchaa lagtaa hai tumhe yaad kar
bas kuch pal muskuraa letaa hoon akele mein
bas itnaa hai.. aur kuch bhi nahi hai...

koi bandhan nahi hai tumse meraa...
tumse kuch bhi nahi hai meraa...
haan main sach kehtaa hoon...
mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi hai...



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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2013, 03:56:55 PM »
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waaah Kapil ji
mastam mast yani chumeswari post

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bhai jab kuch bhi nhi hai
to itni baaten bhi nhi hai
jab na hone me itna hai
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2013, 06:07:41 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
hamesha ki tarah accha likha hai..
vaise mujhe shayri ki samajh kahan..log to aisa hi sochte hain. mera to maanna hai ki dusre log jo raai hamare bare me kaayam karte hai, hame vahee  maanna chahiye. .kaun kab is jahan me sabko satisfy kar paaya hai.

anyway ..aapko vapas dekhkar khushi huee yahan.
kaafi dino ke baad kuch likha aapne.
all the best.
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2013, 10:27:20 PM »
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Bahot khoob...laajawaab...

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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2013, 12:27:58 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Wah Hridayji,
Bahut khoob,Nicely written composition.
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2013, 02:14:36 AM »
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huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........... itne din baad post kiya to sahi tumne kuch....... thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx.......
mastam mast fultoofataakkkkkkkkk likha hai kp... just mind blowing.......
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2013, 02:29:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Killbill ji.... aap to Kasak ji ki language bolne lag gaye..... hehehehehehe... Usual Smile

waaah Kapil ji
mastam mast yani chumeswari post

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to itni baaten bhi nhi hai
jab na hone me itna hai
to hota to kitna nhi hota!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2013, 02:56:58 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
hamesha ki tarah accha likha hai..
vaise mujhe shayri ki samajh kahan..log to aisa hi sochte hain. mera to maanna hai ki dusre log jo raai hamare bare me kaayam karte hai, hame vahee  maanna chahiye. .kaun kab is jahan me sabko satisfy kar paaya hai.

anyway ..aapko vapas dekhkar khushi huee yahan.
kaafi dino ke baad kuch likha aapne.
all the best.
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2013, 02:04:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Asif ji.....!!!

Bahot khoob...laajawaab...

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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2013, 01:53:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Sudhir ji....!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Wah Hridayji,
Bahut khoob,Nicely written composition.
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2013, 02:13:42 PM »
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thank u soooooooooooo much hai ji.....!!!

huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........... itne din baad post kiya to sahi tumne kuch....... thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx.......
mastam mast fultoofataakkkkkkkkk likha hai kp... just mind blowing.......
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