<>*Mujhko sama jane do*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 07, 2010, 08:01:32 PM
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<>*Mujhko sama jane do*<>


Jaan zara kareeb aao mujhe khudme sama jane do
Aaj ki raat yunhi na gujar jaye aaj to kuch ho jane do

Main tadap rahi hun jis tarah tere pyar ki pyas me
Aaj tum bhi mujhme khoke khudko bahek jane do

Na sambhlo aaj k log kya kahenge humko sath dekh
Aaj tham lo meri baahein aur raahon se guzar jane do

Khinchkar mujhe apne kareeb tum aur bhi pyarse
Aaj mere labon ko apne labon se chhu jane do

Bahot bechain hun main inn baahon me samane ko
Aaj tod do har bandhan khudme mujhko sama jane do...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2010, 08:38:29 PM »
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ye kaali raat.. aur pyaar se bhari ye baaat....
uffffffffffffffff... soch ke hi kuch kuch hone lagta hai....
ek dum mast mast mastammmmmmmmmmmmm likha hai aapne... bahut khoob ji...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

humein tumhaare aankhon ke samundar me doob jaane do,
baahon me hamaare aake khud ko tum bikhar jaane do,

dekhke hamaare pyaar ki kashish chaand ko sharmaane do,
apne husn ki chaandni se tum hume aaj chamak jaane do,

julfon ko is tarha kholo ki din me raat ho jaane do,
apne julfon ke baadal me tum humein aaj bheeg jaane do,

kankanpaate hothon ki narmi humein mehsoos karne do,
gulaabi hothon ki mehek se humein mehek jaane do,

jism ki narmi tumhaare, baahon ki garme tumhaare,
aaj ki raat humein tum mohabbat me behek jaane do,

ji bharke tum humein pyaar karke aaj jal jaane do,
aake baahon me hamaare khud ko aaj pighal jaane do,

ji len zindagi aaj ki raat, kya pata kal ho na ho,
aaj ki raat pyaar me tum humein bas mar jaane do...
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2010, 04:53:12 AM »
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Beautiful lines,great poetry,
except it very nice creation,
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2010, 05:39:13 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KASAK..DIL KI JI....

AAO PAAS ITNE KAREEB AAO--MAT GABRAO JO CHAHE HO JANE DO
MUJHME TUM SAMA JAO--TUJHME "MUJHKO SAMA JANE DO".......
 
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2010, 04:32:22 PM »
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bhut acha likha hai aur replies bhi ache hai

aap logon ki jugal bandi salamat rahe

aap sabkaaaaaaa

raaaaahiiiiiiiiiiiiii


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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2010, 04:33:32 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahi  ji...!!!
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