NAZRON SE JHALAKTA PYAR..

by punam on October 08, 2007, 05:34:39 PM
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honeyrose
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«Reply #105 on: February 17, 2008, 01:34:13 PM »
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Punam bohat acha likha hai... Usual Smile

Aapke pyaar ko taras gayee hum..
Yun waqt beetha na jaane hum..

Aapke aankhon mein bass jahee hum..
Ek kwabh ki duniya mein kho jahee hum..

Aapka pyaar hi kafi hai mujhe iss zindagi mein..
Ek jhalak dekhne koh taras gayee hum..
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punam
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«Reply #106 on: February 17, 2008, 01:37:34 PM »
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Thanx di ..bahot acha likha aap ne...
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Pooja
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«Reply #107 on: February 20, 2008, 03:40:13 PM »
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good job by all
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samir_bc
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«Reply #108 on: February 20, 2008, 03:52:58 PM »
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sab ne bahot acha reply kiya ..kya likhun samjh me nahi aa raha...
bas choti si kosish ki...

Aaj her mode pe teri zaroorat hai mujhe
tere bina har ek pal muddat sa lagta hai mujhe

nigahen band ho ya khuli tum hi tum nazar aate ho mujhe
khumar chaya hai tumhara hamare dil pe saaf nazar aata hai mujhe...

bahot khoob likha hai punam ji, koshish to hume karni padti hai, reply karne ke liye.




har mod per hum saath denge tera bus itna aitbaar rakhna
yeh pyaar ka jo hai khumar yunhi barkarar rakhna

dur hoke tujhse kaise hum reh pate hain, kaise batayen tujhe
saamne ajao mere, mushkil hai jazbaaton per ab kaabu rakhna

hum seh na payenge kabhi jo hongi num tumhari ankhen
apne honto pe hamesha muskan yunhi abaad rakhna

kabhi ho jaye koi khata humse to maaf kardena hume,
apne dil me apne koi baat na chupa ke rakhna
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punam
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«Reply #109 on: February 20, 2008, 03:54:26 PM »
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Bahot khoob reply samir ji..bahot acha likha aapne..

hum seh na payenge kabhi jo hongi num tumhari ankhen
apne honto pe hamesha muskan yunhi abaad rakhna...

bahot acha laga yeh lines...waise her ek line dil se nikli aisa feel hua.. samir ji aap k jeetne bhi post main dekhi aap her line ka  ek ek sabd khali nahi jane dete ho..sab ka reply karte ho..
bahot khoob...aisa reply karna toh mujhe nahi aata hai..
great ji...
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Pooja
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«Reply #110 on: February 20, 2008, 03:55:45 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai samir too good!! bahoot hi pyari kavita likhi hai apne./.. yah kines to bahoot hi achi lagi

har mod per hum saath denge tera bus itna aitbaar rakhna
yeh pyaar ka jo hai khumar yunhi barkarar rakhna

dur hoke tujhse kaise hum reh pate hain, kaise batayen tujhe
saamne ajao mere, mushkil hai jazbaaton per ab kaabu rakhna
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punam
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«Reply #111 on: February 21, 2008, 12:32:24 PM »
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sab ne bahot acha reply kiya ..kya likhun samjh me nahi aa raha...
bas choti si kosish ki...

Aaj her mode pe teri zaroorat hai mujhe
tere bina har ek pal muddat sa lagta hai mujhe

nigahen band ho ya khuli tum hi tum nazar aate ho mujhe
khumar chaya hai tumhara hamare dil pe saaf nazar aata hai mujhe...

bahot khoob likha hai punam ji, koshish to hume karni padti hai, reply karne ke liye.

har mod per hum saath denge tera bus itna aitbaar rakhna
yeh pyaar ka jo hai khumar yunhi barkarar rakhna

dur hoke tujhse kaise hum reh pate hain, kaise batayen tujhe
saamne ajao mere, mushkil hai jazbaaton per ab kaabu rakhna

hum seh na payenge kabhi jo hongi num tumhari ankhen
apne honto pe hamesha muskan yunhi abaad rakhna

kabhi ho jaye koi khata humse to maaf kardena hume,
apne dil me apne koi baat na chupa ke rakhna

samir ji kuch try ki likhne..reply me...

Har kadam har pal saath aap ka chahta hai yeh dil
aap ki nazaron se chalakte pyar me.. dekhte dekhte doob gaya hai yeh dil

khud ko na bhool jaye aagosh me aap ke
saamne aap ke aane se darta hai yeh dil..

hamari ek muskan ke liye hamesha apne ko jalata hai aap ka dil
aap ka beshumar pyar dekh ghabrata hai yeh dil..

chah ke bhi aap se kuch chupa nahi sakta hai yeh dil
aap hi se judi hai har khushi yeh kaise bhula sakta hai yeh dil...
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«Reply #112 on: February 21, 2008, 03:54:19 PM »
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samir ji kuch try ki likhne..reply me...

Har kadam har pal saath aap ka chahta hai yeh dil
aap ki nazaron se chalakte pyar me.. dekhte dekhte doob gaya hai yeh dil

khud ko na bhool jaye aagosh me aap ke
saamne aap ke aane se darta hai yeh dil..

hamari ek muskan ke liye hamesha apne ko jalata hai aap ka dil
aap ka beshumar pyar dekh ghabrata hai yeh dil..

chah ke bhi aap se kuch chupa nahi sakta hai yeh dil
aap hi se judi hai har khushi yeh kaise bhula sakta hai yeh dil...



thanks punam ji, pooja ji, apko meri kavita pasand ayi,


bahot khoob likha punam ji, ap bahot acha likhti ho




hum to khud tere saath rehna chahte hain har peher
tera deedar to har lamha karna chahta hai dil

jo pyaar jhalakta hai apki nazron me aj
yunhi jhalakta rahe sada humper chahta hai dil

mehsus karna chahte hain tere saanso ki mahek hum bhi
teri bahon me duniya ko bhulna chahta hai dil

ghabrata hai dil kehte ho, bharosa nahi lagta hai humper
kaise yakeen dilayen tumhe, kitna chahta hai dil

chupate nahi per kuch kehte bhi nahi ho ap humse
sunna apki meethi si awaz har pal chahta hai dil
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punam
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«Reply #113 on: February 21, 2008, 03:55:50 PM »
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Bahot khoob samir ji..bahot hi acha reply hamesha ki tarah...

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Pooja
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«Reply #114 on: February 21, 2008, 03:56:42 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam and samir
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samir_bc
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«Reply #115 on: February 21, 2008, 04:06:28 PM »
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thanks punam ji, pooja ji, aapse hi hosla milta hai likhne ka.


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punam
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«Reply #116 on: February 23, 2008, 09:18:05 AM »
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thanx di...
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punam
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«Reply #117 on: February 23, 2008, 09:19:08 AM »
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Hawa ne aaj mithi si dhun sunayi hai
kisi ki yaad dabe paav chali aayi hai

band palkon ki aad me chupa hai woh
phir uske deedar ki tadap dil me ayi hai

hawa se puchi jab uska pata
bola khud tasveer uaka tu nazron me chupayi hai..

punam bandhne lagi aaj usse hadd se jyada umeed..
dil me bus usike pyar ka diya jalayi hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #118 on: April 23, 2008, 06:15:44 PM »
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good one Punam
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punam
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«Reply #119 on: April 23, 2008, 07:55:13 PM »
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Thanx pooja di...
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