pass rehkar mere.........

by Gesu on November 28, 2005, 05:04:28 PM
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Paas rehkar mere jab tum sharma si jaati ho,
Bahon mein samet loon tumko aisi pyas jagati ho,
Hausla bhi padta nahi ke tum jaldi khafa ho jaati ho,
Saath rahein har yoon hi tum aisa armaa jagati ho,
Humse nazre mila nahi paati kyon itna hamein tadpaati ho,
Janmon ka rishta hai ab to kyon tum samajh na paati ho,
Apni haya se fir bhi jaana bahut kuch tum keh jaati ho...
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2005, 03:53:15 PM »
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saath rahein har dum yoon hi aisa armaa jagati ho,

ek shabd reh gaya

Paas rehkar mere jab tum sharma si jaati ho,
Bahon mein samet loon tumko aisi pyas jagati ho,
Hausla bhi padta nahi ke tum jaldi khafa ho jaati ho,
Saath rahein har dum yoon hi aisa armaa jagati ho,
Humse nazre mila nahi paati kyon itna hamein tadpaati ho,
Janmon ka rishta hai ab to kyon tum samajh na paati ho,
Apni haya se fir bhi jaana bahut kuch tum keh jaati ho...
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2005, 05:54:16 PM »
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u are really great gesu -kapoor  excellent

bhool kar apni zaat ko ,tum ko yaad kiya
baat be baat ,tum ko yaad kiya
neend naraz ho gayi hum se
hum ne jis raat tum ko yaad kiya


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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2005, 10:11:53 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob GK and abeera!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2005, 11:27:00 AM »
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thanks abeera  and pooja aap dono ki shayari bahut hi pasand hai mujhe aapki fan hoon
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2005, 12:43:07 PM »
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is tarha  jessay sabhe hum se milay piyar k saath

     hum kesse say naa milay tum se mulaqat ke baad

     itnee mazboti se  veranay k dar band howay

      dil mein utre na koi zaat teree zaat k baad


take care
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2005, 01:57:51 PM »
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bahut khoob abeera ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2005, 06:25:29 PM »
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bahot  khoob.....Abeera......Kapoor  ji........
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2005, 07:31:07 PM »
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thanks all of u for liking my poetry

Yaqeen apni mohabbat per itna hai mujhay
Meri chahat ko dekho ge to lot aao gay

Jaan dainay ki baat to her koi karta hai
Zindagi sanwarny wala kahan se laao gay

Agar jo dil ki suno gay tu haar jao gay
Hum jaisa pyaar phir kahan se pao gay
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2005, 03:47:03 AM »
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Very nice work all of you. I think we must publish a book with the best compositions in this website....Wot u say guys and gals...
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2005, 11:52:37 AM »
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nice idea dildaar ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2005, 06:45:09 PM »
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thank u all of u  i agree with u shayar dildar

kuch nasha apki baton ka hai,
kuch nasha dheemi barsat ka hai,
hamne aap yunhi sharabi math kahiyae
yeh dil par asar apkae mulaqat ka hai!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2006, 06:14:37 PM »
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thank you all of you  i agree with you shayar dildar

kuch nasha apki baton ka hai,
kuch nasha dheemi barsat ka hai,
hamne aap yunhi sharabi math kahiyae
yeh dil par asar apkae mulaqat ka hai!!

take care,bye


nice one.........
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2006, 11:38:39 AM »
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Yeh alfaaz kyon ruk jaate hain mere labon tak aake,
Keh to deti hain yeh nazare palkon ki chilman ko uthake,
Kaash keh paate tumse ke bus rehna hai tumhari ragon mein samake,
Chahatt na jane yeh kaisi hai ke judai mein rehte hain hum aanson bahake,
Armaan-e-dil hai ke sula doon tumhe apna aanchal udhake,
Khoye rahe hum tum sapno ki duniya mein
Le chale thandi hawaon ko fizaon se churake,
Buss mein kahaan hai dil yeh mera
Padh lo har jazbaa iska iski parton ko hatake,
Le chalo sung apne ae Mehboob mere hamein pankh lagake...........


gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2006, 11:58:19 AM »
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wah kay abaat hai good job all... Gesu kamal ka likhti ho app..... bahoot khoob,,

pakar tuje, ab kuch aor pana nahi chahti
rah kar kareeb tere, kahin main ab jaana nahi chahti
chaahat apni se, jeevan mai tera mehka du
teri chaahat mai, khud ko aa mitta du.....
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