Pyaar Kar Dekhna !!!

by deepika_divya on February 11, 2010, 12:51:11 PM
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Kabhi Mere Dil Mea Utar kar Dekhna                
Kabhi Mujhse bhi Pyaar Kar Dekhna                    

Kitna Intzaar Liye hai In Ankhon Mea
Kabhi Inn Ankho ko Nihaar Kar Dekhna

Tume bhi Ulfat ki Seir kara laayege
Kabhi mujh par bhi  Aithbaar kar Dekhna

Teri Dil Mea Hum Hai ki Nahi yaara
Mere Liye Dil Bekaraar Kar dekhna

Tujhpe Jaan Luta degi yea “ Divya”
Kabhi Mujhse bhi Pyaar Kar Dekhna                    



~~Divya~~

Issi Topic pe Ak aur koshish.. Please comment which one is better !

khuli fizaao mai pukaar kar daikhna
kabhi mujhko bhi pyaar kar daikhna

Kitna Intzaar Liye hai In Ankhon Mea
Kabhi Inn Ankho ko Nihaar Kar Dekhna

Tume bhi Ulfat ki Seir kara laayege
hame bhi apno mai shumaar kar daikhna

Teri Dil Mea Hum Hai ki Nahi yaara
Mere Liye Dil Bekaraar Kar dekhna

Tujhpe Jaan Luta degi yea “ Divya”
Kabhi us par bhi  Aithbaar kar Dekhna



Divya
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2010, 01:13:34 PM »
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very nice sophiji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2010, 01:32:18 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Divya..

Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2010, 01:37:01 PM »
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Bohot khoobsurat Divs..bohot khoob !
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2010, 01:46:47 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2010, 01:52:29 PM »
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Kabhi Mere Dil Mea Utar kar Dekhna                 
Kabhi Mujhse bhi Pyaar Kar Dekhna                     

Kitna Intzaar Liye hai In Ankhon Mea
Kabhi Inn Ankho ko Nihaar Kar Dekhna

Tume bhi Ulfat ki Seir kara laayege
Kabhi mujh par bhi  Aithbaar kar Dekhna

Teri Dil Mea Hum Hai ki Nahi yaara
Mere Liye Dil Bekaraar Kar dekhna

Tujhpe Jaan Luta degi yea “ Divya”
Kabhi Mujhse bhi Pyaar Kar Dekhna                     



~~Divya~~

Wah wah very romantic creation dear Divya....  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2010, 02:16:53 PM »
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very nice sophiji...

Thank you Geet Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2010, 02:17:35 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Sophi Ji
Waqai Men Muhabbaton Bhara Yeh Nagma
Bahut Hi Pyaar Likha Hai Ji Aapne..
Bahut Khoob.......


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~


Thank you soo so so so Much Shihab !
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2010, 02:19:47 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Divya..

Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thank you so so  so so Much Khwaish ji !
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2010, 02:20:51 PM »
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Yeh Aajkal Tujhe Ho Kya Gaya Hai Divya..? Bahut Hi Romantic aur Mohabbat Bhara Likh rahi Hai.. hehehehe.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Ishq-e-Jazzbaaton se Saji Pashkash Hai Aapki.. Bahut Khooooooooob.. Daad Kubool Karen..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Kuch Aisa Likh Jaate Ho Dil Ki Qalam Se Tum,
Dil Kaagaz Ka Bhi Dharakne Ko Majboor Ho Jata Hai....!!!!




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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2010, 02:21:29 PM »
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Bohot khoobsurat Divs..bohot khoob !

THank you sooooooooooo Much Talat Di ... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2010, 02:22:37 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so Much Niraj ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2010, 02:23:04 PM »
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Wah wah very romantic creation dear Divya....  Applause

Thank you so so Much Malli !
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2010, 02:24:23 PM »
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Yeh Aajkal Tujhe Ho Kya Gaya Hai Divya..? Bahut Hi Romantic aur Mohabbat Bhara Likh rahi Hai.. hehehehe.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Ishq-e-Jazzbaaton se Saji Pashkash Hai Aapki.. Bahut Khooooooooob.. Daad Kubool Karen..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


Kuch Aisa Likh Jaate Ho Dil Ki Qalam Se Tum,
Dil Kaagaz Ka Bhi Dharakne Ko Majboor Ho Jata Hai....!!!!




**~** Mann **~**

Hawwwwwwwwwwww. Thank you so so so Much VIcky.. Itni tareef .. Bas aise hi gungunate hue likh diya... Thanks a lot for such a Grand appreciation.

Aur Kya kahe.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne bhi !
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2010, 02:36:06 PM »
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Sophi ji ek shandaar creation hai ye aapki.  Shokh mizaaj ke saath likhi gai ek nazaqat aur  bebaki se bhari muhabbat ki poem hai. Afreen and bravo.
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