pyaar ki daastaan

by aapkipalak on May 16, 2008, 02:44:30 PM
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hum unse pyaar krte hain kya ye kaafi nahi hai
kyun puchhte log wjeh
jahan dekhte hain hum,bus dikhta wahi hai
kyun na du use sheh...
raat bhar uska khyaal jata nahi
palak hi jhapak jaye, wo manjar kbhi aata nahi
kyun na mar mitu uspe
ye jindagi mit jaye chahe
ya chhin jaein sb rishte
ek aur prem kahani ab adhuri na rahegi
ek aur jodi judai ka gum na sahegi
e-doston ye hai mere pyaar ki daastaan
paa lungi main usko
dekhega hindustaan
dekhega ye jahaan
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2008, 02:47:15 PM »
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Palak,

Bahut khoob ! Applause

Kitna aatamvishwas jhalakta hai aap ki shayari mein !

Bravo ! That shows the +ve spirit in you !

Keep going !
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syednaami
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2008, 04:25:26 PM »
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Undisputed masterpiece work by you.
I like the way you show the courage and desire. Keep the spirit up.
Bravo!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2008, 04:33:17 PM »
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Quote from: aapkipalak on May 16, 2008, 02:44:30 PM
hum unse pyaar krte hain kya ye kaafi nahi hai
kyun puchhte log wjeh
jahan dekhte hain hum,bus dikhta wahi hai
kyun na du use sheh...
raat bhar uska khyaal jata nahi
palak hi jhapak jaye, wo manjar kbhi aata nahi
kyun na mar mitu uspe
ye jindagi mit jaye chahe
ya chhin jaein sb rishte
ek aur prem kahani ab adhuri na rahegi
ek aur jodi judai ka gum na sahegi
e-doston ye hai mere pyaar ki daastaan
paa lungi main usko
dekhega hindustaan
dekhega ye jahaan



Nice one..Keep it up !
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aapkipalak
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2008, 04:54:06 PM »
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 icon_flower
aap log to boht encourage krte hain!
you inspire ppl to write from the bottom of the heart.
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Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2008, 05:03:48 PM »
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Palak

You can write from the middle or top of the heart also...he he he (jk)

Keep going !
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2008, 06:43:40 PM »
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palak bohat acha likha hai aapne .. icon_flower
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