Raat Hai Tanha Tanha - - - - - - -Ghazal

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Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha    (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha              (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2010, 04:53:42 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 05:53:20 PM »
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Wah wah Riyaz-bhai bada khoobsurat kalaam hai aapka... Applause Applause Applause

Ye raat ki tanhaayi
Aur Ye lambi judaayi

Sab orr Sannata he sannata hai
Na koi aahat na koi aawaaj hai

Aankhon mai nihaa.n nindiya hai
Abr mai khila-khila sa Chand hai

Faasla kitna bhi kyu na ho darmya
Saath maangti hu chhod sharmo-haya

Ye raat ki tanhaayi
Aur Ye lambi judaayi



Abr mein chaand nihaa.n raat hai tanha tanha   (Abr=cloud, Nihaa.n=hidden)
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha             (Ayaa.n=appear)
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Faisla tumne mere baare mein jo kuchh bhi kiya
Aaj bas kar do bayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Haal kya hijr mein uska hua kisse poochein
Kya isi tarha wahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
"Ashna" ye to hai khush fahmi koi aayega
So gaya saara jahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha

Riyaz "Ashna"


  
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2010, 08:08:18 PM »
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Kaash ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapne meri ye rachna pasand farmai.
waah Riyaaz bhai khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob,behatreen ghazal 
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2010, 09:33:00 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah Kya Baat hai Riyaz ji.. Iss Ghazal ka har sher Khumar se Bhara hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat aur romantic ghazal likhi hai... Bahoot Khoob !  Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2010, 10:40:45 PM »
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Ache gazal he
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2010, 10:58:07 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB RIYAZ SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2010, 05:45:11 AM »
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Wah wah Riyaz ji and Koyal ji,very touching and lovely gazal.bahut khoob likha aap dono ne.
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2010, 08:03:44 AM »
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Koyal-didi apko ye rachna achhi lagi apka shukria. Aap ki ye on the spot poetry bhi kamaal ki hai. Wah wah bahut achha likha hai aapne.
Wah wah Riyaz-bhai bada khoobsurat kalaam hai aapka... Applause Applause Applause

Ye raat ki tanhaayi
Aur Ye lambi judaayi

Sab orr Sannata he sannata hai
Na koi aahat na koi aawaaj hai

Aankhon mai nihaa.n nindiya hai
Abr mai khila-khila sa Chand hai

Faasla kitna bhi kyu na ho darmya
Saath mangti hu chhod sharmo-haya

Ye raat ki tanhaayi
Aur Ye lambi judaayi



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«Reply #9 on: February 14, 2010, 12:11:12 PM »
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Sophi ji aapne meri creation ki mukt kanth se tareef ki aapka bahoot bahoot shukriya.
Waah Waah Waah Kya Baat hai Riyaz ji.. Iss Ghazal ka har sher Khumar se Bhara hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat aur romantic ghazal likhi hai... Bahoot Khoob !  Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 14, 2010, 03:12:23 PM »
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Bahut Ache Riyaz Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2010, 06:32:39 PM »
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Nice Riyaz JI
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2010, 07:32:42 PM »
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Dear KA Sahab hausla afazaai ke liye aapka dher sara shukriya.
BAHUT KHOOB RIYAZ SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 14, 2010, 07:51:29 PM »
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Dher saara shukriya Madhu Didi ye ghazal pasand farmane ke liye. Aapki hausla afazai se muhhe hamesha hi likhne ki prerna milti hai.
Wah wah Riyaz ji and Koyal ji,very touching and lovely gazal.bahut khoob likha aap dono ne.
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«Reply #14 on: February 14, 2010, 11:15:20 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji apko meri ghaza pasand aai. Aapki hausla afazai se mujhe kuchh likhne ki prerna milti rahegi.

Bahut Ache Riyaz Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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