* Sanam *

by angel4u on March 03, 2007, 05:05:26 PM
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Naseebon Ke Pannon Par Hai Ek Naam Likha Hua,
Hamare Haathon Mein Hai Kisika Haath Bandha Hua,

Kitne Suhane Bane Hai Din Kitni Madhosh Raatein,
Mehka Hai Har Pal Jaise Kismaton Se Churaya Hua,

Maasoom Si Uski Baatein, Bholi Si Uski Shararatein,
Har Ada Mein Chhupa Ho Koi Bachha Shararat Karta Hua,

Aayine Mein Takti Hai Uski Chanchal Aankhein,
Gudgudata Hai Uska AQs Mujhe Hararat Karta Hua,

Kyon Utar Gaya Wo SANAM Rooh Mein Is Qadar "ANGEL"
Lagta Hai Mera Wajood Uske Bina Dhundhlaya Hua...
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2007, 05:28:46 PM »
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Naseebon Ke Pannon Par Hai Ek Naam Likha Hua,
Hamare Haathon Mein Hai Kisika Haath Bandha Hua,

Kitne Suhane Bane Hai Din Kitni Madhosh Raatein,
Mehka Hai Har Pal Jaise Kismaton Se Churaya Hua,

Maasoom Si Uski Baatein, Bholi Si Uski Shararatein,
Har Ada Mein Chhupa Ho Koi Bachha Shararat Karta Hua,

Aayine Mein Takti Hai Uski Chanchal Aankhein,
Gudgudata Hai Uska AQs Mujhe Hararat Karta Hua,

Kyon Utar Gaya Wo SANAM Rooh Mein Is Qadar "ANGEL"
Lagta Hai Mera Wajood Uske Bina Dhundhlaya Hua...
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Last line is very nice :wink:
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2007, 05:40:22 PM »
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Naseebon Ke Pannon Par Hai Ek Naam Likha Hua,
Hamare Haathon Mein Hai Kisika Haath Bandha Hua,

Kitne Suhane Bane Hai Din Kitni Madhosh Raatein,
Mehka Hai Har Pal Jaise Kismaton Se Churaya Hua,

Maasoom Si Uski Baatein, Bholi Si Uski Shararatein,
Har Ada Mein Chhupa Ho Koi Bachha Shararat Karta Hua,

Aayine Mein Takti Hai Uski Chanchal Aankhein,
Gudgudata Hai Uska AQs Mujhe Hararat Karta Hua,

Kyon Utar Gaya Wo SANAM Rooh Mein Is Qadar "ANGEL"
Lagta Hai Mera Wajood Uske Bina Dhundhlaya Hua...
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superbsssssssss  Angel...........  bahot  pyari  poem likhi   ho........  bahot accha laga mujhe padhker.... :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2007, 05:43:45 PM »
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khali lasti line hi achhi hia??? sad5


THanks re motuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2007, 05:47:58 PM »
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khali lasti line hi achhi hia??? sad5


THanks re motuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu tongue3


Yaar angel naam le kar toh bolo. For example:-
Khaali last line hi acchi hai saira?

Aise toh motu mein ho gaye na :D  :D  :D

Aur haan poori acchi hai Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2007, 05:56:25 PM »
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oh... sad5
wo thoda confused dimag hai mera abhi.

OH thanks saira ji puri poem pasand karne ke liye :D
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2007, 05:58:53 PM »
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oh... sad5
wo thoda confused dimag hai mera abhi.

OH thanks saira ji puri poem pasand karne ke liye :D


Confuse kyun :?:  Puzzled !  :?:
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2007, 06:07:33 PM »
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wo to hota hai mera hamesha, ye posting ke wakt confused rehta haidimag mera :D
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2007, 06:08:48 PM »
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wo to hota hai mera hamesha, ye posting ke wakt confused rehta haidimag mera :D


waise itni mushkil toh nahi hai posting :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2007, 06:12:33 PM »
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hai na mere liye sad5
are idhar chat karenge to dant padegi monitors se.
abhi PM karti hoon.
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2007, 06:14:07 PM »
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hai na mere liye sad5
are idhar chat karenge to dant padegi monitors se.
abhi PM karti hoon.


Nahi padegi hum acche bache hain :D  :D  :D
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2007, 07:44:49 PM »
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vry nice didi......
rely vry vry cute :D
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2007, 07:59:43 PM »
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Thanks anjani :D
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2007, 10:05:49 PM »
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It's Beautiful Angel...
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2007, 03:36:38 AM »
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Superb Angle[/color]
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