"" sanche me dhali ho " 'Nirala'

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surat sirat se bhali ho
sanche me b dhali ho
 sagmrmr sa badan hai
 khilta gulab sa ang ang hai
goliyan barsati uf ye nigahe
hawao ko thmne mchalti ye bahen
 jadu sa h chaya mujh pr
 tu hi bta q na fida ho jau tjhpr
besharm si lahrati ye zulf tre
kese na udte ab hosh mre
 us pr ye adaye tri bato ki
 nind q na ude ab mri rato ki
kmar ki lchak h nagan si blkhati
muskan jese baharo me phul khilati
 skuchana tera wo shrmana
 kafi hai smjhne ko q jalta h prwana
jgmg chehre pr hya ka b prda h
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 04:55:40 PM »
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nirala mastana iska adhura part jaldi post kijiye
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 05:01:14 PM »
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haan jaldi post karo adhoora part.
dil mange khubsurati ka defination more---
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 06:03:37 PM »
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Niraala jee aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab.. Kafi ishqiyaaN khayaal pesh kiye
aapne.... kafi achche lafz aur adaygi ki hai daad...

Haan woH jo "besharm" kaha hai
Uski jagaaH resham hota to aur bhi achcha lagta..
tarif meiN khot nahi aani chahiye aisa hume lagta hai..Usual Smile

baki aapki marzi..

Is khub kalaam per daad kabool kijiye..

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabad rahiye..
khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         



surat sirat se bhali ho
sanche me b dhali ho
 sagmrmr sa badan hai
 khilta gulab sa ang ang hai
goliyan barsati uf ye nigahe
hawao ko thmne mchalti ye bahen
 jadu sa h chaya mujh pr
 tu hi bta q na fida ho jau tjhpr
besharm
 si lahrati ye zulf tre
kese na udte ab hosh mre
 us pr ye adaye tri bato ki
 nind q na ude ab mri rato ki
kmar ki lchak h nagan si blkhati
muskan jese baharo me phul khilati
 skuchana tera wo shrmana
 kafi hai smjhne ko q jalta h prwana
jgmg chehre pr hya ka b prda h

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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 07:37:48 AM »
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wah Parwaaz ji wah--
aap jaise Bandon ko kahte hain real shayr.
aapne wo chij pakdi jo dekhna chahta tha.
aapko to mera bahut sa Thanku hai.
aapko hum bata de ki--mene socha tha Resham likhu Besham nahi par Kal mene 2 ladkiyo ko dekha jo apni khuli zulfon ko ek Besham ki tarah jhate se piche ki taraf lahra gai thi jese kah rhi ho -- lo dekho meri zulfon ko aur aahen bharo, bas mere dimaag me wahi Besharm word put karne ka aya.
wese bhi kuch azeeb na likhu to mai kahe ka 'nirala'
hehe
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 07:43:55 AM »
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K mam and KB ji--
aaplogo ka bhi dhanyabaad
jo apne meri ye kavita ya yun kahen bematlabi rachna ko padha Usual Smile
wese iska koi adhura part nhi hai sirf ek line mene nahi likha--ab wo line arz hai::
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jagmag chehre par uske ek
   haya ka bhi parda hai

'nirala' jaag bhi ja ab ,ye koi haqeeqat nahi
    bas tera haseen koi khab sunahra hai
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 07:44:16 AM »
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wah.... khub niralaji...

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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2011, 07:48:11 AM »
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Thanx Manju
aap sarahte rahen
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aapke gam hue kya kam
ya ab bhi karti ho aankhen nam
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2011, 07:53:51 AM »
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thanks niralaji....
hal puchhne ke lie

dil kya dimag kya aur aanken kya.
uske gham main to tarbatar hain sabhi.

thanks
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2011, 07:58:16 AM »
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""
gamo ko yun ashiyana na bana
harek bahane se khushiyon ko hi thikaana bana
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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2011, 07:59:51 AM »
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hunnn....
bahut koshish karke har gaye hain.
kam ab aati nahin samjhaishen.
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2011, 08:11:38 AM »
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"
kosis karnewalon ki haar nahi hoti"
agar kosis karke haar gaye to aapne sirf Harne ki kosis hi ki thi
don mind k
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thanx
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2011, 09:51:02 AM »
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Nice poem...Nirala ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ye Sancha kidhar tha aur kisne dhala usse....Khuda ka naam mat lena...


surat sirat se bhali ho
sanche me b dhali ho
 sagmrmr sa badan hai
 khilta gulab sa ang ang hai
goliyan barsati uf ye nigahe
hawao ko thmne mchalti ye bahen
 jadu sa h chaya mujh pr
 tu hi bta q na fida ho jau tjhpr
besharm si lahrati ye zulf tre
kese na udte ab hosh mre
 us pr ye adaye tri bato ki
 nind q na ude ab mri rato ki
kmar ki lchak h nagan si blkhati
muskan jese baharo me phul khilati
 skuchana tera wo shrmana
 kafi hai smjhne ko q jalta h prwana
jgmg chehre pr hya ka b prda h

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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2011, 10:17:07 AM »
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han shayad sach kah rahe honge aap....

kam ab aati nahin hain koshishen.
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2011, 10:36:46 AM »
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dhanyabaad Kukku sahiba.
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kosisen kar tu haar na maan
   ye gam to hai bas kuch pal ka mehmaan
"
thanx Manju
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