sitam(gul)

by gulzargul on September 01, 2008, 10:15:54 AM
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esy esy sitam insaan ker gay
jinhein dekh ker shytaan der gay

kitni laashein kitna khoon zameen per
maasoom logon ke aazaa bikhar gay

pooch rahy hain yateem bachy jahadiyion sy
quraan ke likhy oosool kidhar gay

mer jaaein gy jhooty khuda duniyaan ke
kitny namrood kitny firaon mar gay

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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 10:29:36 AM »
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once again a good subject and nice wording  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 10:46:10 AM »
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thanks a lot dear friend bekarar
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 12:29:15 PM »
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Wah khoob likha hai aapne gul ji ... Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 12:35:56 PM »
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thank u dear honeyrose


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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2008, 12:36:55 PM »
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VERY NICE GUL JI,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2008, 12:47:42 PM »
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thank u k.shael ji


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