So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar... !!

by deepika_divya on January 17, 2010, 09:13:35 PM
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Na jane kyun jab yea Hawaayein mujhe chu kar
guzarti hai Dil pe ak dastak si de jaati hai ...
Shayad Ishaaro -2 Mein Kehti hai tum aane wale ho
Ya fir yuhin mujhe Behla kar chali jaati hai


Kuch Pesh kar rahi hun... kuch ajeeb sa ehsaaso ko sabdo mein daalne ki koshihs ki hai umeed karti hun aapko pasand aayegi...Usual Smile


So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar
Aaj Najane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra raha hai
Kar Raha hai Yea Chand Sitaaro se baatein
Aur Dhadkano ko Najane Kyun Bada raha hai

SHayad Sama Jana chahta hai Teri Bahoon mea
Har Khushi aur GUm ko Bhula dena chahta hai
Duniyaa Ki Nazro se Chupte Chupate aaj yea
Dil Sirf Tere Dil Pe Panaah Lena chahta hai

Teri Dhadkan Ko Apni Dhadkan Bana kar yea
Teri Saanso ko agosh mein bharna chahta hai
Lipat kar Tere Seene se aaj Mera Tan Mann
Teri Pyaar ki Agan Mein Kho jana chahta hai

Bhoolana Chahti hun Mein Sab kuch tere siwa
Yea Mausam bhi Dekho Tujhme samaana chahta hai
Dekho Kaise yea Mujhe ched raha hai har Pal
Yea Mujhe Aaj tere Qareeb lana Chahata hai

So Jaun kuch Pal Tumare Seene Se Lag kar
Aaj Najane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra raha hai
Kar Raha hai Yea Chand Sitaaro se baatein
Aur Dhadkano ko Najane Kyun Bada raha hai

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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2010, 09:29:09 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwww.. Divya..!!! Bahut Bahut Bahut Mohabbat Bhare Ehasaas Yahan Bikhere Hain aapne.. Pyaar Bhari Jis Soch Ke Sath Aapne Yeh Rachna Likhi hai.. Padh Kar wahi Tasveer Saamne aa Jati hai.. Behad Umda Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 07:46:53 AM »
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Wah Divya ji,too good,mindblowing creation.excellent,bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.keep it up dear. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 08:35:30 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI SOPHI JI.....

AAKHRI BAR MERE SANAM MUJHE PAR VISHWAS KAR
"SO JAANE DE MUJHKO KUCH PAL TERE SEENE SE LAG KAR
AGAR MERA DIL TERE DIL PAR NAHIN KARE ASAR
APNE DIL SE BAHAR NIKAL DENA MUJHE LAAT MAR KAR...
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2010, 08:42:40 AM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard :hatsoff:bahut khoob Cara ji.mindblowing lines.hanste hanste rone lagi main aapke lines padke Cara ji. BangHead BangHead Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard tongue3 Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2010, 10:50:40 AM »
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Bahut khoob Divya Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2010, 03:34:34 PM »
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jawab nahi aap ka DIVYA ji....
mindbloing.........
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2010, 04:19:22 AM »
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Beautiful lines Kaash ji,bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2010, 04:58:47 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwww.. Divya..!!! Bahut Bahut Bahut Mohabbat Bhare Ehasaas Yahan Bikhere Hain aapne.. Pyaar Bhari Jis Soch Ke Sath Aapne Yeh Rachna Likhi hai.. Padh Kar wahi Tasveer Saamne aa Jati hai.. Behad Umda Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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Thank You so so so Much Vicky !
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2010, 04:59:17 PM »
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Wah Divya ji,too good,mindblowing creation.excellent,bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.keep it up dear. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Madhu ji !
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2010, 05:00:01 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI SOPHI JI.....

AAKHRI BAR MERE SANAM MUJHE PAR VISHWAS KAR
"SO JAANE DE MUJHKO KUCH PAL TERE SEENE SE LAG KAR
AGAR MERA DIL TERE DIL PAR NAHIN KARE ASAR
APNE DIL SE BAHAR NIKAL DENA MUJHE LAAT MAR KAR...

Thanks and Good one.. waise Kaash has given one advice ..take it in a positive way...Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2010, 05:00:27 PM »
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jawab nahi aap ka DIVYA ji....
mindbloing.........

THank you so much Dear !
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2010, 05:01:51 PM »
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AAKHRI BAR MERE SANAM MUJHE PAR VISHWAS KAR
"SO JAANE DE MUJHKO KUCH PAL TERE SEENE SE LAG KAR
AGAR MERA DIL TERE DIL PAR NAHIN KARE ASAR
DIL KI BAAT BATAIYEGA DIL KI SARGOHIYUN ME AAKAR

dear Cara ji since it is posted in khumaar poem
to aapki ijazat chahunga last line ko aisa karke
asha hai aap pasand karenge.



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bahut hi behtareen ehsaasaat dikhaye hain aapne Divya ji
aur aajkal aap aur Vicky ji ki posts padhne ka alag maza hai
bahut hi achi jugal bandi se likhte hain aap dono
vicky dear is me aapne kuch nahi likha icon_silent DOH


ehsaason ke saaye me ehsaas bhi ek khyaal hai
jazbaat hi to ehsaas ke hamsha bahaal hai




Bahoot Khoob Kaash ji.. and the lines you added and they way ou teaches him its really good !

V.Good lines by you too... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2010, 05:11:48 PM »
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GOOD SOPHI Main asha karti hoon ki aap aise hi likhe or tarkki kare....

hi i am back i am muskan in yoindia.............

Ehsaas jazbaat mein badal jate hai
dil ki suchai zuban par aa jati hai
zindagi ki gaherai kuch panno par likh jati hai
ansoyon ki tarangein un yaadon se jud jati hai
jise log bita hua kal samjhkar bhool jate hai
phir bhi yaad unhe har rooz tadpati hai..........

dont mind aise hi banai.......
AAP LOG BATANA KAISI LAGI ......MERI SHAYARI..............?
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2010, 05:20:59 PM »
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GOOD SOPHI Main asha karti hoon ki aap aise hi likhe or tarkki kare....

hi i am back i am muskan in yoindia.............

Ehsaas jazbaat mein badal jate hai
dil ki suchai zuban par aa jati hai
zindagi ki gaherai kuch panno par likh jati hai
ansoyon ki tarangein un yaadon se jud jati hai
jise log bita hua kal samjhkar bhool jate hai
phir bhi yaad unhe har rooz tadpati hai..........

dont mind aise hi banai.......
AAP LOG BATANA KAISI LAGI ......MERI SHAYARI..............?
***********************************MUSKAN*********************


Thank you so much Muskaan for wishes and appreciation...

Good to see you Back.. So Warm Welcome from Me !

And you have written Very Good... Keep writing and try to be regular Usual Smile

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