tadap na jaane

by Gesu on October 24, 2005, 08:09:14 AM
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tadap na jaane yeh kaisi ruk ruk ke hoti hai,
 kasak na jaane kaisi yeh har pal si rehti hai,
Kaise katenge yeh pal bus yahi uljhan si rehti hai,
Deewana yeh dil bus unhe hi dhoondta rehta hai,
Door unse rehkar yeh aankh kyon roti hai,
Na jaane is dil per kaisa bhoj sa yeh rehta hai,
Door jab unse hoti hoon saansein ruk si jaati hai,
unke bin har pal kyon jaane dum ghut taa sa rehta hai..
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2005, 12:18:01 PM »
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tadap na jaane yeh kaisi ruk ruk ke hoti hai,
 kasak na jaane kaisi yeh har pal si rehti hai,
Kaise katenge yeh pal bus yahi uljhan si rehti hai,
Deewana yeh dil bus unhe hi dhoondta rehta hai,
Door unse rehkar yeh aankh kyon roti hai,
Na jaane is dil per kaisa bhoj sa yeh rehta hai,
Door jab unse hoti hoon saansein ruk si jaati hai,
unke bin har pal kyon jaane dum ghut taa sa rehta hai..

Very Nice Gesu ji..........
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2005, 12:22:00 PM »
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thanks natural ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2005, 10:57:55 AM »
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Gesu u r 2 gud! very well written.. keep it up..

tere bina zindagi jaise kehar ban gayi hai
yad kar ke tujhko subha sehar ban gayi hai
kya batau kaise jite hain tujhse bichadke
lagta hai tujhko dekhe huwe ek umr guzar gayi hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2005, 11:09:49 AM »
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Good.......

Dekh Lo Hume APni HI Nazar Main Ki DIl Main Hi Tuh Tere Hum Rehte Hai
Tuhi Hai Dhadkan Mere Dil Ki Yaar Hum Tujhme Behte Rehte Hai
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2005, 07:31:17 AM »
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kal raat yoon hi mein bethi thi chatth per,
kal raat yoon hi mein bethi thi chatth per,
dil ko naa  jaane lag gaye thhey kitne per,
udaney woh chala tha awaaz di usko per,
puchha jo meine kahaan jaa rahe ho
bola na kuch bhi apni dhunn mein woh tha per,
gaya tha woh unki dhadkan se kuchh churaney,
pucha gaye thhey churaney ko tum to,
kyon le gaye thhey meri dhadkan tum sang mein,
bola woh mujhko na churaney gaya tha,
mehak dhadkanon ki milane gaya tha...
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2006, 12:31:20 PM »
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Good.......

Dekh Lo Hume APni HI Nazar Main Ki DIl Main Hi Tuh Tere Hum Rehte Hai
Tuhi Hai Dhadkan Mere Dil Ki Yaar Hum Tujhme Behte Rehte Hai


wah sandhya ji........
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2006, 12:33:09 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Gesu,..
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2006, 01:24:58 PM »
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tadap na jaane yeh kaisi ruk ruk ke hoti hai,
 kasak na jaane kaisi yeh har pal si rehti hai,
Kaise katenge yeh pal bus yahi uljhan si rehti hai,
Deewana yeh dil bus unhe hi dhoondta rehta hai,
Door unse rehkar yeh aankh kyon roti hai,
Na jaane is dil per kaisa bhoj sa yeh rehta hai,
Door jab unse hoti hoon saansein ruk si jaati hai,
unke bin har pal kyon jaane dum ghut taa sa rehta hai..


bahut khoob gesu ..........
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2006, 04:45:06 AM »
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shukriya ranju ji .. aapne kuch nahi likha......
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2006, 04:56:36 AM »
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dil dhoondta hai bs unko har taraf
har nazaare mein bas unka gumaan hota hai
thaam lele hain hum dil apna jab bhi zikar unka kahi hota hai
unko toh ehasas bhi na hoga is baat ka
ki mera dil unse kitna pyaar karta hai
hai yeh tadap kaisi ,aur dil kyu yun beqrar sa rehta hai
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2006, 04:58:27 AM »
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dil dhoondta hai bs unko har taraf
har nazaare mein bas unka gumaan hota hai
thaam lele hain hum dil apna jab bhi zikar unka kahi hota hai
unko toh ehasas bhi na hoga is baat ka
ki mera dil unse kitna pyaar karta hai
hai yeh tadap kaisi ,aur dil kyu yun beqrar sa rehta hai


wah ranju ji ek ek lavz bahut khoobsurat. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2006, 03:08:30 AM »
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shukriya gesu ........

liya jo naam uhnone hamara bhari mehfil mein
ek parada sharamo haya ka meri aankho mein utar aaya
thee tadap unke bulaane mein aise
ki mere dil ko bhi un per behad pyaar sa aaya
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«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2006, 03:11:55 AM »
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Wow Ranajana ji.... Good going.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2006, 03:25:11 AM »
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shukriya Natural ................ :D
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