tamam ho jaye

by phoenix on June 24, 2006, 12:02:12 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 25, 2006, 07:09:56 PM »
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thnx tabbasum ji and nice reply
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«Reply #16 on: June 25, 2006, 07:18:57 PM »
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thanx phoenix
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«Reply #17 on: June 25, 2006, 08:27:04 PM »
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tum wo to nahi the jiske liye maine ta umr raah dekhi
tumhara aana meri zindagi me ek khwab hi tha

aaj jab tumhe dekhta hun mein aey humnaqsh
to yakin mano khud hosh kho deta hun

tum ek haqiqat to nahi ho sakti ho is zindagi ki
agar ho jati to baat hi kya thi yaaron

aaj tumhe armaan batana chahta hun is dil k
agar fursat mil sake to ek baar mujhe soch k dekhna

jab tumhe dekha tha pehli baar maine
to aisa laga abhi neend se jaaga hun

yaad hai aaj bhi wo din jab tumhe neend se uthta hua dekha tha
aisa laga mano kisi oos ki boond se milkar taro taaza ho gaya hun

jab tum din me aayi thi mujhse milne
to aisa laga koi hai jise meri parwah hai

har sham jab tumhari zulfo me guzari
to dil ne chaha ye waqt yahin tham jaye

aur jab raat ne apne aanchal failaya
to laga ki iss raat ki subah na ho

ab tum hi batao mein tumhe kaise chod sakta hun
jab har ghadi lagta hai ki tum hi mere jeene ka karan ho
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«Reply #18 on: June 25, 2006, 10:16:44 PM »
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WOW gud job Ranju..NIttu and Tabassum ji
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ranjana
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«Reply #19 on: June 25, 2006, 10:46:18 PM »
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tum wo to nahi the jiske liye maine ta umr raah dekhi
tumhara aana meri zindagi me ek khwab hi tha

aaj jab tumhe dekhta hun mein aey humnaqsh
to yakin mano khud hosh kho deta hun

tum ek haqiqat to nahi ho sakti ho is zindagi ki
agar ho jati to baat hi kya thi yaaron

aaj tumhe armaan batana chahta hun is dil k
agar fursat mil sake to ek baar mujhe soch k dekhna

jab tumhe dekha tha pehli baar maine
to aisa laga abhi neend se jaaga hun

yaad hai aaj bhi wo din jab tumhe neend se uthta hua dekha tha
aisa laga mano kisi oos ki boond se milkar taro taaza ho gaya hun

jab tum din me aayi thi mujhse milne
to aisa laga koi hai jise meri parwah hai

har sham jab tumhari zulfo me guzari
to dil ne chaha ye waqt yahin tham jaye

aur jab raat ne apne aanchal failaya
to laga ki iss raat ki subah na ho

ab tum hi batao mein tumhe kaise chod sakta hun
jab har ghadi lagta hai ki tum hi mere jeene ka karan ho


bahut sunder hai yeh ............


jab se woh hamare humkhayal ho gaye
toh jindagi jeene ke pal aasaan ho gaye

jab dil dharkane laga unke naam se
toh woh hamari dil aur hamari jaan ho gaye

yun toh kisi ke naaz uthata nahi thaa dil mera
unko dekha toh sab naaz uthane aasan ho gaye

lagti thee apni manzi bahut dur hamko
woh bane jab se hamrahi mere toh
saare raste hum per meherbaan ho gaye
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«Reply #20 on: June 25, 2006, 10:56:47 PM »
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Bahut khoob Ranju.....

Ek Dua hai meri bhi ki Chahate hue tumhe yeh Zindagi Tamaam ho jaye.....
Bann jaane do Afsaane humari Mahobbat ke par Mahobbat kahin Badnaam na ho jaye......

Geet gate sansaar me ek Panchi Raat ke peher kisi ki Yaad me Sookhe drakht par sirr rakh So jaye.....
Badlo kuch Sama aisa ki Dinn me Deedar unke toh Raat ko unhe Intezaar mera ho jaye......

WaQt Guzre nahi Guzarta kaise kahein hum ki yeh Ikhtiyaar kabool ho jaye......
Jo dee raahat tumne Dil ko kaise kahein ki Pyar me nannha sa Dil Fana ho jaye........!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #21 on: June 26, 2006, 07:16:53 AM »
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nice one...........


jo dekhi hai maine tere labo per halki si hansi
mere khyalao mein aaj bhi woh hansi khil jaati hai

ek kuhsboo udaa  aayi hai pawan aaj tere badan ki
mere dil ko aaj bhi woh kushboo meheka jaati hai

teri baato ki shararat jab bhi gunj uthati hai mere kaano mein
woh nigah teri pyaar ki aaj bhi mere jehan per badal si chhaa jaati hai

umar bhar jis ghari ka intazaar mein kiya hai
aaj teri bahoo.n mein simat jaane ko beqarar hui jaati hai
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«Reply #22 on: June 26, 2006, 02:39:54 PM »
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tum wo to nahi the jiske liye maine ta umr raah dekhi
tumhara aana meri zindagi me ek khwab hi tha

aaj jab tumhe dekhta hun mein aey humnaqsh
to yakin mano khud hosh kho deta hun

tum ek haqiqat to nahi ho sakti ho is zindagi ki
agar ho jati to baat hi kya thi yaaron

aaj tumhe armaan batana chahta hun is dil k
agar fursat mil sake to ek baar mujhe soch k dekhna

jab tumhe dekha tha pehli baar maine
to aisa laga abhi neend se jaaga hun

yaad hai aaj bhi wo din jab tumhe neend se uthta hua dekha tha
aisa laga mano kisi oos ki boond se milkar taro taaza ho gaya hun

jab tum din me aayi thi mujhse milne
to aisa laga koi hai jise meri parwah hai

har sham jab tumhari zulfo me guzari
to dil ne chaha ye waqt yahin tham jaye

aur jab raat ne apne aanchal failaya
to laga ki iss raat ki subah na ho

ab tum hi batao mein tumhe kaise chod sakta hun
jab har ghadi lagta hai ki tum hi mere jeene ka karan ho


bahut khoob

kabhi ham saath the rahon me
 kal ki hi baaten hain
magar ik mod phir aaya
to tanha rah gai main bhi
khata teri thi ya meri
ise ab sochne se kya
faqat bas ye haqeeqat
vahaan tanha khada hai tu
yahan tanha khadi hun main..................
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ranjana
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«Reply #23 on: June 27, 2006, 06:21:01 PM »
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bahut khub tabassum...........

tere yaado ka ajab pehra hai mujhe per
teri baato ka asar gahara hai mujhe per

neend aaye bhi toh kaise aaye mujhe
tere khawabo ne yahan per ghera  hai  har pal

ek baar aake jhalak apni dikha jaao sanam
kisi ka dil bilkul akela aur tanaha hai yahan per
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #24 on: June 27, 2006, 06:33:17 PM »
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thanx ranju
bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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ranjana
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«Reply #25 on: June 28, 2006, 03:56:38 PM »
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shukriya tabassum ............

har ghari har pal bas tera khayal rehta hai
tu kahi bhi rahe bas mere dil ke pass rehta hai

jinse karte  rehte hain hum baate apne dil ki
suna hai woh bhi hum bin udas sa rehata hai

ek ehasas hai woh pyaar ka mere liye
mere tan man mein bas woh mehekta rehta  hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #26 on: June 29, 2006, 09:14:19 AM »
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Phoenix ji your most welcome....

bahut khoob.... keya bat hai....

kashti main baithi hoon,
door hai kinara,
hawayao se pousti hoon,
kiya haal hai tumahra..........

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thnx sonu ji and pankhuri ji

aaj ki sham kuch is tarah se dono par cha jaye
bhale ho jaye ruswai par bahoon se jaa na paye

tum socho zara wo kya aalam hoga
jis ghadi is zindagi mein hamara milan hoga

har taraf ek ruhani sa aalam hoga
tum sharmaogi meri bahoon mein par ye pyaar na ab kam hoga

aisa ye mausam ka fasana jo kabhi na khatam hoga
jab chaho tum yahan se dur jaana mera saaya har dum sang hoga

aab to bas jo hoga wo isi pal hoga
agar ho saka to mera pyar aaj raat tere sang hoga
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«Reply #27 on: June 29, 2006, 09:16:04 AM »
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bahut dosto keya bat hai... bahut achi mehfil sajayehuyee....

phoenix.... gaurav... ranju sis.... tabu... or sabhi logo ney bahut acha likha hia wonderful dosto.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #28 on: June 29, 2006, 05:48:01 PM »
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shukriya sonu jaan.........

hawa ne gunguna ke kaha ki woh aa gaye
jo yeh kushboo si faili hai fizao mein yeh unhi ko toh hai
yeh jo madmast sa ho gaya hai sama
yeh jhankaar si mere unke milan ki ho toh hai
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«Reply #29 on: June 30, 2006, 05:08:46 AM »
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Ranju sis your most welcome...  :oops:

bahut khoob ranju sis....


milne ko dil ab karta hai, par kyon karta hai pata nahin,
phoolon sa tan badan hai par dil kyon darta hai pata nahin,
mil lete to unse hum, milne to koi kahta nahin,
Par mil bhi kaise le unse, ghar ka unka to pata nahin

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shukriya sonu jaan.........

hawa ne gunguna ke kaha ki woh aa gaye
jo yeh kushboo si faili hai fizao mein yeh unhi ko toh hai
yeh jo madmast sa ho gaya hai sama
yeh jhankaar si mere unke milan ki ho toh hai
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