taqdeer ka sitara

by tabassum shakeel on June 21, 2006, 07:33:40 AM
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mera to chaand bhi tu hai
aur sitara bhi tu
ki mujhko aasman se bhi
zyada kahin pyara hai tu
ye meri ankhon ki chamak
hai teri ankhon hi se to
isi chamk se mere aariz
bhi to dahkte hain
bhari hai jholi meri
pyar ke phoolon se tere
inhe sitaron se to main
badal nahi sakti
ki tera pyar hi meri
taqdeer ka sitara hai
ki sare asmaan ke taare to
fizool se hain
ki inki chamak hai sabki
par tu to mera hai
ki tera pyar hi meri
taqdeer ka sitara hai
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PREMANSHU
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2006, 08:32:10 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai . . . TS nice work
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2006, 01:34:11 PM »
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shukriya premanshu
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2006, 01:41:57 PM »
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bahut khub tabassum ji............

 taqdeer ke sitaro ki bisaat dekhiye
 mujh jaise bhatakte ashiq ki aaukat dekhiye
 jinhe dhoond rahe the hum barso se dar-badar
 aaj hui mere dar pe hi unse meri mulakat dekhiye

..................@fahi@....................
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2006, 02:05:21 PM »
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bahut khoob likhte hain aap fahi

taqdeer thi aisi ki kabhi khush na rah sake
sab kuchh diya khud ne magar ham na sah sake
chahat hamari phool thi to ek vo hi na mila
ghar me hai dher motiyon ka chaha na jo kabhi
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2006, 03:44:47 AM »
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bahut khub tabassum ji............

 taqdeer ke sitaro ki bisaat dekhiye
 mujh jaise bhatakte ashiq ki aaukat dekhiye
 jinhe dhoond rahe the hum barso se dar-badar
 aaj hui mere dar pe hi unse meri mulakat dekhiye

..................@fahi@....................


Nice words Fahi

Mujh ko tha hardum yakin
Tera Dil ke Hone mein
Phir bhi tujhe dhundta raha
Duniya ke har kone mein

Takdeer ka sitara jab
Hum par bhi muskraya
Tab jana humne PREM kya hai
Teri PREET ko khudi mein paya . . .


TS keep writing this beautifully . . .
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2006, 01:02:06 PM »
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bahut khoob prem

jo  kho chuka hai vahi ek khwab likhati hun
jo jaa chuka hai use hi sadaen detin hun
na to sitara hai koi na aisi qismat hai
main raat dekha hua ek khwab likhati hun
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