~ * Tera Pyar * ~_Dev

by thinkhattk on August 16, 2010, 08:57:14 AM
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Din-raat satati he yaad teri,
kya karu kuchh kar nahi sakti,

reh-reh kar tarsati he yaad teri,
kya karu pyas buja sakti nahi,

thodo-thodi ho kar tadpati he yaad teri,
Dil ko mulakat karne ko kehti yaad teri,
kya karu tu muje mill sakta nahi,

tuje pyar karne ki abhilasha karti he yaad teri,
Kya karu meri mahobaat rokk nahi sakti,

tere pyar me pagal karti he yaad teri,
kya karu pagalpan ko rokk nahi sakti,

mera mann ulajj jata he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu mere vicharo ko bandh nahi sakti,

tu door ja raha lagta he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu 'tere pyar' ko bhul nahi sakti....
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 09:02:43 AM »
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wah wah su vaat chhe Devangi... kya likha hai... bahot hi badhiya ji bahot hi badhiya... bole to ek dam mast....
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 09:04:49 AM »
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aabhar rancho ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 09:12:20 AM »
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tamaro pan khub khub aabhar Devangi...

lo hu pan kaik kahi dav tamara aa pyar mate..

Hu E Nathi Je Koina Jivan Ni Varta Bani Jav,
Hu E Nathi Ke Koini Ankhna Ashru Bani Jav..

Hu To Ek Vahal No Dariyo Chhu,
Jena Jivan Ma Jau Teni Jindgi Bani Jav..
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 09:18:33 AM »
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bov j saras lakhyu chhe rancho ji...... Clapping Smiley  Applause


Pavan no zoka tamati yaad aapavi jay chhe,
milan kyare thase ae khabar nathi pan thase aevu dil ni dhadkan kahi jay chhe...
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 09:40:53 AM »
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wah su vaat kahi tame to...

Tari Aankhoni Pyas Banva Taiyar Chhu,
Tara Dil No Dhabakar Banava Taiyar Chhu..

Tu Jo Aavi Ne Mane Sajivan Kare To,
Hu Roj Laash Banva Pan Taiyar Chhu..
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 06:58:07 AM »
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Wah Devangi ji wah... bahut khoobsurat shabdon me aapne dil ka haal bataya hai... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!

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pyaar bhulaale ke liye nahi kiya karte,
yaad mitaane ke liye nahi kiya karte,
kiya ho agar pyaar sachche dil se,
to usse dur jaane ki baat nahi kiya karte,

yadein to paagal hoti hain,
bin bulaaye aa hi jaati hain,
tanhaayion me humein chhedkar,
humein bahut tadpaati hain,

ye na socho ki main tumse mil nahi sakta,
dur hoke bhi main aaj bhi tumhaare paas hi hoon,
dil me jo ho use nazron se nahi dhunda karte,
dil se bula ke dekho main tumhaare saamne hi hoon...
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 08:31:37 AM »
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bahot bahot sukriya klaskar ji....
aapne bhi bahoi aachha responce diya he....  Clapping Smiley  Applause

Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 06:58:07 AM
Wah Devangi ji wah... bahut khoobsurat shabdon me aapne dil ka haal bataya hai... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob...!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

pyaar bhulaale ke liye nahi kiya karte,
yaad mitaane ke liye nahi kiya karte,
kiya ho agar pyaar sachche dil se,
to usse dur jaane ki baat nahi kiya karte,

yadein to paagal hoti hain,
bin bulaaye aa hi jaati hain,
tanhaayion me humein chhedkar,
humein bahut tadpaati hain,

ye na socho ki main tumse mil nahi sakta,
dur hoke bhi main aaj bhi tumhaare paas hi hoon,
dil me jo ho use nazron se nahi dhunda karte,
dil se bula ke dekho main tumhaare saamne hi hoon...
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 08:36:53 AM »
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shukriya Devangi ji...!!!

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 17, 2010, 08:31:37 AM
bahot bahot sukriya klaskar ji....
aapne bhi bahoi aachha responce diya he....  Clapping Smiley  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 08:59:09 AM »
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Saras bhuj saras baku...eymaj lakhti reh.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Tere pyar ki yaado ko tou koi bandhan nahi roj satati hain
Mera pyar in samaaj ke bandhano mai seemat ke reh jata hai

Quote from: thinkhattk on August 16, 2010, 08:57:14 AM


Din-raat satati he yaad teri,
kya karu kuchh kar nahi sakti,

reh-reh kar tarsati he yaad teri,
kya karu pyas buja sakti nahi,

thodo-thodi ho kar tadpati he yaad teri,
Dil ko mulakat karne ko kehti yaad teri,
kya karu tu muje mill sakta nahi,

tuje pyar karne ki abhilasha karti he yaad teri,
Kya karu meri mahobaat rokk nahi sakti,

tere pyar me pagal karti he yaad teri,
kya karu pagalpan ko rokk nahi sakti,

mera mann ulajj jata he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu mere vicharo ko bandh nahi sakti,

tu door ja raha lagta he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu 'tere pyar' ko bhul nahi sakti....
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 10:57:09 AM »
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devangi bht pyari poem hai aapki..... Applause Applause Applause Applause

tere pyaar me khud ko khokar
sab kuch paaya tha maine
aaj khokar tujhko hi
sharm se sir jhukaya hai maine...

kuch apne hi shabd kho diye
kuch apni hi pareshani me
pyaar ne tere lauta diya
jo kuch khoya tha maine....
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 11:37:09 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on August 16, 2010, 08:57:14 AM


Din-raat satati he yaad teri,
kya karu kuchh kar nahi sakti,

reh-reh kar tarsati he yaad teri,
kya karu pyas buja sakti nahi,

thodo-thodi ho kar tadpati he yaad teri,
Dil ko mulakat karne ko kehti yaad teri,
kya karu tu muje mill sakta nahi,

tuje pyar karne ki abhilasha karti he yaad teri,
Kya karu meri mahobaat rokk nahi sakti,

tere pyar me pagal karti he yaad teri,
kya karu pagalpan ko rokk nahi sakti,

mera mann ulajj jata he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu mere vicharo ko bandh nahi sakti,

tu door ja raha lagta he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu 'tere pyar' ko bhul nahi sakti....

Good one Dev
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2010, 08:14:56 AM »
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Dear thinkhattk! Achchha likha hai aapne. Daad haazir hai.

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Quote from: thinkhattk on August 16, 2010, 08:57:14 AM


Din-raat satati he yaad teri,
kya karu kuchh kar nahi sakti,

reh-reh kar tarsati he yaad teri,
kya karu pyas buja sakti nahi,

thodo-thodi ho kar tadpati he yaad teri,
Dil ko mulakat karne ko kehti yaad teri,
kya karu tu muje mill sakta nahi,

tuje pyar karne ki abhilasha karti he yaad teri,
Kya karu meri mahobaat rokk nahi sakti,

tere pyar me pagal karti he yaad teri,
kya karu pagalpan ko rokk nahi sakti,

mera mann ulajj jata he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu mere vicharo ko bandh nahi sakti,

tu door ja raha lagta he fir bhi aati yaad teri,
kya karu 'tere pyar' ko bhul nahi sakti....
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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2010, 08:30:46 AM »
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hmm devangi ji bahut mast likhela he apne...

baki kahuga nahi kyuki mere hath kehene nahi dege so likh deta hun~

apki poem ka jawaab shayad ye panktiyan ban sake~


dhoondi galiyan panghat me dhoonda foolon me bagon me dhoonda
galiyan sooni panghat soona or soona baag ko chhod gaye
apna kehkar mujhko tum kyun apna muh mod gaye~ 
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«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2010, 08:53:02 AM »
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sukriya kasak....
good one.... Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 17, 2010, 10:57:09 AM
devangi bht pyari poem hai aapki..... Applause Applause Applause Applause

tere pyaar me khud ko khokar
sab kuch paaya tha maine
aaj khokar tujhko hi
sharm se sir jhukaya hai maine...

kuch apne hi shabd kho diye
kuch apni hi pareshani me
pyaar ne tere lauta diya
jo kuch khoya tha maine....
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