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«Reply #45 on: June 20, 2005, 11:32:10 AM » |
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jazjbaat apne dil ke vo batate nahi
unhe bura na lage, ye baat soch kar
hum unse kuch bhi jatate nahi
manana chahte hai hai jab vo ruthe humse
pata nahi vo mane ya na mane humse
ye baat soch ke hum usnhe ruthathe hi nahi
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«Reply #46 on: June 20, 2005, 06:26:53 PM » |
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Thanks Sandhaya & thycreator.... aur kya khoob likha hai aap dono ne bhi....
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sandhaya
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«Reply #47 on: June 21, 2005, 01:13:27 PM » |
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Thanks Sandhaya & thycreator.... aur kya khoob likha hai aap dono ne bhi.... sukhriya Aryaan ji ......... kaise hui baat kaise mulakat hui kaise gujra vo din kaise raat hui hasin thi fizaein hasin suruaat hui par manjur na thi khuda ko khusi meri phir na koi baat unse na hi mulakaat hui |
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #48 on: June 21, 2005, 02:06:55 PM » |
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jazjbaat apne dil ke vo batate nahi
unhe bura na lage, ye baat soch kar
hum unse kuch bhi jatate nahi
manana chahte hai hai jab vo ruthe humse
pata nahi vo mane ya na mane humse
ye baat soch ke hum usnhe ruthathe hi nahi ur welcome all friends.............excellet reply thy........aryan....sandhya....bahot khoob aap sabhi logon ne likha.......keep it up.............. |
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sandhaya
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«Reply #49 on: June 21, 2005, 02:26:20 PM » |
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jazjbaat apne dil ke vo batate nahi
unhe bura na lage, ye baat soch kar
hum unse kuch bhi jatate nahi
manana chahte hai hai jab vo ruthe humse
pata nahi vo mane ya na mane humse
ye baat soch ke hum usnhe ruthathe hi nahi ur welcome all friends.............excellet reply thy........aryan....sandhya....bahot khoob aap sabhi logon ne likha.......keep it up.............. sukhriya waheed ji ............... haale dil ki haalat byan hum karenge tum thamo isse wafa hum karenge mil jayengi tujhe teri khushian saari tujhe paane ki har dua hum karenge |
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sandeepparker
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«Reply #50 on: June 21, 2005, 05:44:02 PM » |
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wah bhai wah kya likhti ho sandhaya jee maan gayee aapko...
kadam kadam par hawa ki disha ka dhyan rakhna..
muskil samay me bhi DOSTI ko yaad rakhna...
hamari yaadon ki KHUSHBOO jaroor aayegi..
bas tum apni nosi saaf rakhna....
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«Reply #51 on: June 21, 2005, 06:46:06 PM » |
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every one has just written amazing..!!!
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good work keep it up!
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i'll die without you
what am i without you
i lie on grains of sand
without you i cant stand
you are all that i am
i'll die without you
you are the one for me
to you do i belong
i walk along the shore
each day i want you more
give me your hand
i want to dance with you
i'll die without you
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Aryaan
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«Reply #52 on: June 22, 2005, 12:43:36 AM » |
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Good work Sandhaya, Sandeep & Tosha.....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #53 on: July 02, 2005, 04:09:14 AM » |
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Aaghaz hai abhi yeh anjaam nahi hai
Mayusiyon ka iss dil mein koi kaam nahi hai
Pehchaan na sake woh hazaaron ki bheer mein
Itna bhi tau ajeeb mera naam nahi hai
Jo usko hai diya woh mujhe kyun na mil saka
Shikwa hai zindagi se yeh ilzaam nahi hai
Roshan na kar sake jise hadh-e-intehaa
Aisa tau iss jahan mein koi kaam nahi hai
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sandhaya
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«Reply #54 on: July 02, 2005, 12:54:33 PM » |
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kya baat hai Aryaan .........ji
aur sukhriya Sandeep Ji, Tosha ji Aur Aryaan ji ....
tere naam se pyaar koi naam nahi hai
par kya kare logo ko ache ki pehchaan nahi hai
dete hai duhai vo sachai ki lekin
sach ko bardasth kar sake inme itni jaan nahi hai
saath rehne ke vaade bas vaade hi reh gaye
vaade ko pure karte ke unme ye ehsaah hi nahi hai
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«Reply #55 on: July 02, 2005, 01:17:52 PM » |
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thanks sandhya, aryaan
hum bhi khud dushman-e jaan they pehle
tum magar dost kahan they pehle
ab wahan khaak udtee hai khizaan
phool hi phool jahaan they pehle
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«Reply #56 on: July 02, 2005, 08:25:14 PM » |
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Thanks alot Sandhaya..... & very nice....
nice one Sandeep....
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«Reply #57 on: September 08, 2005, 08:14:09 AM » |
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wah wah Aryaan... Sandhaya.. bohut acha likha!
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«Reply #58 on: September 09, 2005, 09:03:12 AM » |
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Thanx Jalpari....
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«Reply #59 on: September 09, 2005, 11:30:12 AM » |
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Ke taarif karu kia inki jinhone ek sama banaya hai
inki taarif me khuda ne sirf lafzon ka dayara banaya hai ,
baas pantiyan par ke mere dil ko karar ye aaya hai
ke isk ka sacha ghar inke dil me samaya hai.
Bahot bahot bahot aachi feelings hai aaur usse bhi kai guna jyada aacha likha hai aap logon ne , mai to aaapka fan ho gaya hun khas kar aryaan ji aaur sandhya ji ka . really its outstanding , marvellous and really we dont have much words to add here .
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