Teri Soorat Bane.

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 06, 2010, 11:04:02 AM
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khanzar to chala mere dil pe, koi baat nahin.
naksha bana de aisa ki, teri soorat bane.

pathhar ho jaun gham mein, tere iss tarha.
dekhane walon ko, wo teri hi moorat lage.
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2010, 11:52:45 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2010, 12:13:56 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2010, 12:23:47 PM »
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IS DUNIYA ME KHANJAR MARNE WALE BAHOT HI MILL JAYENGE,
PAR MARHAM LAGANE WALE KISI KISI KO MILTE HE.....
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2010, 12:30:38 PM »
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MARHUM KI BISAAT KYA JO ZAKHM BHAR SAKE.
MARHUM WAHI ASAR KARE JO TERE HAATH SE LAGE.

 


IS DUNIYA ME KHANJAR MARNE WALE BAHOT HI MILL JAYENGE,
PAR MARHAM LAGANE WALE KISI KISI KO MILTE HE.....

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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2010, 12:38:18 PM »
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ye baat sach he ki zakha dene wale marham lagate he,
asar to tab hota he jab uske aansu bhi aaye....
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2010, 12:51:01 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     SURESH SANGWAN JI....

TERE HAATHON SE MARNE KO TAIYAR HUN
AGAR PYAR MEIN AZMAANA CHAHTI HO HAME
TU CHALADE KHANGAR MERE SEENE MEIN
KHUDA KARE KHOON IS TARAH DARTI PAR GIREN
KHOON KI EK EK KATRE SE "TERI SURAT BANE"..
 
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2010, 12:54:29 PM »
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yes very right.

uske aansoo aayen barsaat  ban kar.
beh jaaye dard mera sailab bankar.

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ye baat sach he ki zakham dene wale marham lagate he,
asar to tab hota he jab uske aansu bhi aaye....

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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2010, 12:59:05 PM »
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THANKS A LOT CARA JI.
AAPNE KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI.
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     SURESH SANGWAN JI....

TERE HAATHON SE MARNE KO TAIYAR HUN
AGAR PYAR MEIN AZMAANA CHAHTI HO HAME
TU CHALADE KHANGAR MERE SEENE MEIN
KHUDA KARE KHOON IS TARAH DARTI PAR GIREN
KHOON KI EK EK KATRE SE "TERI SURAT BANE"..
 
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2010, 01:00:15 PM »
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yes very right.

uske aansoo aayen barsaat  ban kar.
beh jaaye dard mera sailab bankar.



kese ho sakta he ki barsat aaye or jamin gili na ho,
hame teri yaad aaye or aakhen namm na ho....
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2010, 02:45:54 PM »
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bahut khoob suresh ji....
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2010, 05:29:29 PM »
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Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Suresh ji. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2010, 07:07:01 PM »
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SHUKRIYA THINKHATTK JI.

AGAR KOI AASMAAM KE NEECHE BANA LE
EK AUR AASMAAN,KAISE WO ZAMEEN GILI HO.

YAAD BHI TAKRA KE RUK JAYE RASTE MEIN.
KAISE MAIN MAAN LOON KE AANKH GILI HO.




kese ho sakta he ki barsat aaye or jamin gili na ho,
hame teri yaad aaye or aakhen namm na ho....

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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2010, 07:08:41 PM »
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THANKS BBL JI.. THANKS.
bahut khoob suresh ji....
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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2010, 07:11:30 PM »
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thanks a lot riyaz ji.thanks.
Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Suresh ji. Bahut khoob.
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