Tum aa gaye

by klaskar on April 11, 2010, 06:49:23 AM
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Hamesha dard pe hi likhta hoon. Koshish ki hai is baar dard se kuch hat ke likhne ki. Jaane aap sabko kaisa lagega...

Bhatak raha tha anjaan dagar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye....

Khush hota tha ye soch k ki main khush hoon,
Shayad maalom na tha ki khsuhi kya hoti hai,
Muskurata tha ye soch k ki main khush hoon,
Shayad maloom na tha ki muskurahat kya hoti hai,
Raah me kai log mile mujhe ,
Kuch khaas banke tum aa gaye
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Hosh na tha ye khud ko ki jaana kahaan hai mujhe,
Aankhen band karke zindagi k safar pe chala tha main,
Ek pal k liye bhi ye na socha ki q chal raha hoon main,
Badhawas hoke zindagi k safar pe chala tha main,
Na koi khwaaish thi zindagi se meri,
Ehsaas dilane tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Kabhi kabhi ye khayal aata hai mujhe,
Saanse chalti hain to wo chalti q hain,
Saathi kai hain mere apne, par fir bhi
Tumse milne ko umange machalti q hain,
Jaana chahta tha main zindagi se dur,
Par zindagi banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Kal ki hi baat hai tum mere liye paheli thi,
Poocha karta tumse main yahi baat har baar,
Kaun ho tum, meri zindagi me q aaye ho tum,
Muskurake tum ye kehti, dost hoon main,
Ghayal tha main zindagi ki chot se,
Aitbaar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Aasoon mere sathi the, ghum the mere humdam,
Dard se ishq hua tha mujhko, gumsum rehta tha mai hardam,
Tumne aake haath jo thama bhool gaya tha main har gham,
Dil ko mere jo tumne chhua to bajne lage the sargam,
Zindagi meri thi sukhi niras,
Sangeet banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Aasmaan me chaand sitaare, lagte kitne pyaare pyaare,
Baagon me jab phool khile to sundar ho jate hain ye nazaarein,
Ek tere aa jaane se sawar gaya hai jeewan apna,
Sukhi banjar bhoomi me bhi ab to aane lagi baharein,
Berang tha ye jeewan mera,
Sringaar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Bhatak raha tha anjaan dagar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye....
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 07:32:29 AM »
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Badi khoobsurti se likha hai aap ne apne tanha jeevan  ke baare mein Kapil Ji, Bas aise hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 09:15:37 AM »
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Wah wah Kapil ji bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.too good ,mindblowing creation Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 11:30:04 AM »
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bahut umda peshkash. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2010, 06:09:14 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji hamari kavita ko pasand karne k liye aur hamara hausla afzai karne k liye. bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Badi khoobsurti se likha hai aap ne apne tanha jeevan  ke baare mein Kapil Ji, Bas aise hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2010, 06:12:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... bahut achcha laga ye jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi... ye maine kuch din pehle apne ek khaas dost k liye likha tha aur ab aap bhi mere dost ban gaye hain... so kuch hadd tak ye kavita aapke liye bhi sahi kahi jaa sakti hai...!!!

Wah wah Kapil ji bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.too good ,mindblowing creation Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2010, 06:23:57 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

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