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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2010, 06:00:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... bahut achcha laga jaan ke ki aapko hamaari ye kavita pasand aayi... aapki duwaaon ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya... hamari zindagi me ab tak koi nahi aaya hai... humein uska abhi tak intzaar hai... ye to bas dil se yunhi nikla aur humne likh diya ...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 12, 2010, 12:38:46 PM
I m speech less kapil ji bahut hi khoob likha hai...amazing..jo koi bhi apki zindgi mein aaya hai khuda apko aur unko har khushi se nawaze...bahut khoob dil ko chhu gye apke alfaz..bahut umda...keep writing... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause
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«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2010, 06:03:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji.... aap to humein kuch jyada hi upar utha rahe hain.. likhne k maamle me hum bahut pichhe hain... YO me aise bahut log hain jinke kalam me jaadu hai... sikhna hai to unse sikhiye, hum to khud unhi ko dekh dekh sikh rahe hain... waise aapko sikhne ki kya jarurat , aap bahut khoob likhte hain...!!!

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 12, 2010, 03:10:02 PM
wah..!!
wah..!!

ish kadar aapne likha hai kapil ji....
hats off to you..  Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

aapki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai... kapil ji..

bahut kuchh sikhne ko milta hai aapse...

bhatak raha tha anjaan dagar me,
hamsafar banke tum aa gaye.,
tanha tha mai jeewan safar me,
hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...
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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2010, 06:04:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... !!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2010, 10:45:28 PM
Wow Kapil ji,excellent work,arey meri toh bolti bandh hogayi.bahut bahut khoobsurat,great and mindblowing creation.Koyal ji aur Cara ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2010, 06:20:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... !!!!

aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!! Applause Applause Applause

na rote hain na aansu bahate hain ab hum,
bas haseen khayalon me hi rehte hain hum,
kuch asar hua hai tere aane se mujhpe,
bas tere hi geet gungunaate hain ab hum...

Quote from: neelgold on May 13, 2010, 12:56:34 AM
Wah Wah WAh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kapil Just Mind blowing........

All claps 4 u ..............

"KAMAL DHMAL BEMISAL"

 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

Kuch likha hai ....

Ayye ho jindagi main to hamesha youn hi rehna
Har sawal ka jawab tum ban ke rehna
Ankon main ansoo bi aye paar
Hothon pe muskarhat ban ke rehna
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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2010, 06:21:50 PM »
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Shukriya rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 13, 2010, 05:39:17 AM
Wah! Kya baat hai Kapil
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«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2010, 06:26:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...!!!

Quote from: aaina on May 13, 2010, 12:58:49 PM
khoob kaha hai Kapil sahab aapne bade achay andaaz se apne ehsaason ko alfaazo se piyroya hai.....likhte rahiye sahab




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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2010, 06:44:32 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji... aapki daad humne dil se qubool ki... bahut bahut shukiya...!!!

Quote from: Mann on May 13, 2010, 02:42:23 PM
Kapil Bhai.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Dil ko Chhoo jane wale Ehasaas Yahan Pesh kiye hain aapne.. lajawab aur behad mohabbat bhari Peshkash Hai aapki.. Daad Kubool karen... Applause Applause




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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2010, 06:45:08 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!!

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   Bahut khoob bahut badhiya likha hai kapil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: May 15, 2010, 07:12:35 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 13, 2010, 06:00:31 PM
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... bahut achcha laga jaan ke ki aapko hamaari ye kavita pasand aayi... aapki duwaaon ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya... hamari zindagi me ab tak koi nahi aaya hai... humein uska abhi tak intzaar hai... ye to bas dil se yunhi nikla aur humne likh diya ...!!!


ji bahut acha main umeed karungi ki apka intezaar jald hi khtam ho...likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye..take cre...
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«Reply #24 on: May 15, 2010, 09:26:18 PM »
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maafi maangke mujhe sharminda na karein... aapne apna waqt deke meri kavita ko padha aur use pasand kiya jiske liye main aapka shukraguzaar hoon... bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on May 15, 2010, 06:55:24 PM
Sabse Pahle To Maafi Chahta Hun Derri Ke Liye
Bas Abhi Abhi Meri Nazar Parhi.Bahut Khoobsurat
Nazm Likhi Hai Aapne Klaskar Ji...
Dil Ke Ahsaasaat Ko Lafzon Ki Shakl Mein Bade
Khoobsurat Andaaz Mein Pesh Kiya Hai Aapne...


Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Raunaq Barhate Rahiye...


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #25 on: May 15, 2010, 09:26:43 PM »
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Shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 15, 2010, 07:12:35 PM
ji bahut acha main umeed karungi ki apka intezaar jald hi khtam ho...likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye..take cre...
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«Reply #26 on: July 22, 2010, 06:18:54 PM »
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klaskar ji .....

dil me jo feelings hoti hain kisi ko pakar wo itni bakhubi se aapne isme batai hai k kya kahen....

bht hi dilkash poem hai ye...ise humne apne fav poem collection me sambhal k rakh liya hai...
aapki chiz bina puche le li...aapko aitraaj to nahin hoga na...Huh?
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«Reply #27 on: July 23, 2010, 08:35:46 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya ada karta hoon... ye poem mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai.. ye maine apne ek khaas dost ke liye likha tha last January me... koi meri dost thi jo mujhse bahut dur ho gayi thi... fir wapas mil gayi thi mujhe... jiske liye likha usko bhi bahut pasand aaya...!!!

Meri poem aapke fav poem collection me jaaye isse jyada khushi ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai... mujhe q aitraaz hone laga bhala... ek baar fir se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon main Kasak ji... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 22, 2010, 06:18:54 PM
klaskar ji .....

dil me jo feelings hoti hain kisi ko pakar wo itni bakhubi se aapne isme batai hai k kya kahen....

bht hi dilkash poem hai ye...ise humne apne fav poem collection me sambhal k rakh liya hai...
aapki chiz bina puche le li...aapko aitraaj to nahin hoga na...Huh?
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