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Bhatak raha tha anjaan dagar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye....

Khush hota tha ye soch k ki main khush hoon,
Shayad maalom na tha ki khsuhi kya hoti hai,
Muskurata tha ye soch k ki main khush hoon,
Shayad maloom na tha ki muskurahat kya hoti hai,
Raah me kai log mile mujhe ,
Kuch khaas banke tum aa gaye
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Hosh na tha ye khud ko ki jaana kahaan hai mujhe,
Aankhen band karke zindagi k safar pe chala tha main,
Ek pal k liye bhi ye na socha ki q chal raha hoon main,
Badhawas hoke zindagi k safar pe chala tha main,
Na koi khwaaish thi zindagi se meri,
Ehsaas dilane tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Kabhi kabhi ye khayal aata hai mujhe,
Saanse chalti hain to wo chalti q hain,
Saathi kai hain mere apne, par fir bhi
Tumse milne ko umange machalti q hain,
Jaana chahta tha main zindagi se dur,
Par zindagi banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Kal ki hi baat hai tum mere liye paheli thi,
Poocha karta tumse main yahi baat har baar,
Kaun ho tum, meri zindagi me q aaye ho tum,
Muskurake tum ye kehti, dost hoon main,
Ghayal kiya tha mujhe kisi bewafa ne,
Aitbaar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Aasoon mere sathi the, ghum the mere humdam,
Dard se ishq hua tha mujhko, gumsum rehta tha mai hardam,
Tumne aake haath jo thama bhool gaya tha main har gham,
Dil ko mere jo tumne chhua to bajne lage the sargam,
Zindagi meri thi sukhi niras,
Sangeet banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Aasmaan me chaand sitaare, lagte kitne pyaare pyaare,
Baagon me jab phool khile to sundar ho jate hain ye nazaarein,
Ek tere aa jaane se sawar gaya hai jeewan apna,
Sukhi banjar bhoomi me bhi ab to aane lagi baharein,
Berang tha ye jeewan mera,
Sringaar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...

Bhatak raha tha anjaan dagar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye,
Tanha tha main jeewan safar me,
Hamsafar banke tum aa gaye....

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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 10:59:49 AM »
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Waah waah...bohot khoob Kapil Ji...bohot pyaari lagi aapki ye nazm....bohot hi khoobsurat aur dil ko chuu lene waale alfaaz....Bohot hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 11:54:08 AM »
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Badi sunder kavita hai aapki....wah wah wah Kapil-ji... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hriday se bulaaya aapne tou hum aa gaye
Nibhane ko janm-janm ka saath hum aa gaye
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 12:17:12 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Kapil ji.....

Batak gaya tha anjaan rahon mein
Manzil dikhane "Tum aa gaye"
Haar chuka tha zindagi se
Jeena sikhane "Tum aa gaye".....
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 12:38:46 PM »
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I m speech less kapil ji bahut hi khoob likha hai...amazing..jo koi bhi apki zindgi mein aaya hai khuda apko aur unko har khushi se nawaze...bahut khoob dil ko chhu gye apke alfaz..bahut umda...keep writing... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 03:10:02 PM »
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wah..!!
wah..!!

ish kadar aapne likha hai kapil ji....
hats off to you..  Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

aapki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai... kapil ji..

bahut kuchh sikhne ko milta hai aapse...

bhatak raha tha anjaan dagar me,
hamsafar banke tum aa gaye.,
tanha tha mai jeewan safar me,
hamsafar banke tum aa gaye...
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 10:45:28 PM »
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Wow Kapil ji,excellent work,arey meri toh bolti bandh hogayi.bahut bahut khoobsurat,great and mindblowing creation.Koyal ji aur Cara ji ne bhi khoob saath diya. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2010, 12:56:34 AM »
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Wah Wah WAh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kapil Just Mind blowing........

All claps 4 u ..............

"KAMAL DHMAL BEMISAL"

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Kuch likha hai ....

Ayye ho jindagi main to hamesha youn hi rehna
Har sawal ka jawab tum ban ke rehna
Ankon main ansoo bi aye paar
Hothon pe muskarhat ban ke rehna
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2010, 05:39:17 AM »
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Wah! Kya baat hai Kapil
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2010, 12:58:49 PM »
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khoob kaha hai Kapil sahab aapne bade achay andaaz se apne ehsaason ko alfaazo se piyroya hai.....likhte rahiye sahab




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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2010, 02:42:23 PM »
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Kapil Bhai.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Dil ko Chhoo jane wale Ehasaas Yahan Pesh kiye hain aapne.. lajawab aur behad mohabbat bhari Peshkash Hai aapki.. Daad Kubool karen... Applause Applause




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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2010, 04:21:23 PM »
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   Bahut khoob bahut badhiya likha hai kapil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2010, 05:51:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... agar hamari kavita apke dil ko chhu paai hai to isse jyada khushi ki baat hamare liye aur kya ho sakti hai.... bahut bahut shukriya saahibaan...!!!

Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2010, 10:59:49 AM
Waah waah...bohot khoob Kapil Ji...bohot pyaari lagi aapki ye nazm....bohot hi khoobsurat aur dil ko chuu lene waale alfaaz....Bohot hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2010, 05:55:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji hamari kavita pasand karne k liye...!!!

aapne bahut pyaare lines add kiye hain...!!!

aapke aane se dekho bahaar aane lagi hai,
sukhey gulaab se bhi mehek aane lagi hai...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 12, 2010, 11:54:08 AM
Badi sunder kavita hai aapki....wah wah wah Kapil-ji... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hriday se bulaaya aapne tou hum aa gaye
Nibhane ko janm-janm ka saath hum aa gaye
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2010, 05:56:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji... aapne bhi achcha likha hai...!!!

Quote from: cara on May 12, 2010, 12:17:12 PM
Wah kya baat hai         Kapil ji.....

Batak gaya tha anjaan rahon mein
Manzil dikhane "Tum aa gaye"
Haar chuka tha zindagi se
Jeena sikhane "Tum aa gaye".....
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