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by thinkhattk on May 11, 2010, 11:55:37 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 12, 2010, 09:19:39 AM »
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Pehla keh tou khara su chhe aaje jaman ma..?
Gherti laavi chhe k, co. na canteen nu.....
Ras-pudi hoy tou aavvu.... Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

game j ne kem na game baku....
bov j sarsa chhe....  Clapping Smiley
hal hu lunch mate jav chhu,
kakdine bhukh lage chhe.
chal tare aavvu hoy to....

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«Reply #16 on: May 12, 2010, 09:28:22 AM »
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ghare thi j ho ne baku....
mane ras-puri nathi bhavtu....
pan tara mate laine aavis.  Winking
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«Reply #17 on: May 12, 2010, 12:05:22 PM »
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Is yaad me bhi kisiki fariyad ho tum,

kisiki zindgi ke aakhri sanse ho tum,

is sanso me kisi ka viswas ho tum,

kisike liye jo kabhi bhi bhul na paye wo hasin hamsafar ho tum....


ye hui naa baat..ab badhiya hai aage se bhi dhyan rakhna kyunki jab tak last line thik se likhi nhi hogi tou padhne wala apka sher aur apke jazbaat dono hi smjh nhi payega..keep writng take cre...
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«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2010, 09:52:49 AM »
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Thanks a lot Devangi-di....for your generous offer..... hello hello wave wave
aMDAVAD AAVIS TOU CHOKAS JANAVIS ADVANCE MA...... Winking Winking Winking Winking

ghare thi j ho ne baku....
mane ras-puri nathi bhavtu....
pan tara mate laine aavis.  Winking

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