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Tum jo ho saath mere to sab kuch pyara lagta hai,
Bin tere mere dil ko sukun kaha mil pata hai.
Tum hi to ho mere dil ki har dhadkan ki ravani,
Bin tere mere dil ka dhadkana bhi kaha ho pata hai.
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2016, 01:44:24 PM »
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Tum jo ho saath mere to sab kuch pyara lagta hai,
Bin tere mere dil ko sukun kaha mil pata hai.
Tum hi to ho mere dil ki har dhadkan ki ravani,
Bin tere mere dil ka dhadkana bhi kaha ho pata hai.
 
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2016, 01:46:17 PM »
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Accha khayal hai shikha ji, par shabdon ko baandne ki koshish kijiye (ek lay me)... bura laga ho to maaf kijiyega, par shabdon me jab tak bhavnayen nahi jagengi maza nahi aayega...
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2016, 02:10:02 PM »
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Bahot achey Shikha ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhai Sanchit ki baat par ghaor karen,,, hamari ghalti wohi batata hai jo hamara apna khaer'khwah (well wisher) hota hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2016, 03:04:06 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks adilji
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2016, 03:48:57 PM »
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Bahut khoob  Applause  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2016, 04:34:24 PM »
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Accha khayal hai shikha ji, par shabdon ko baandne ki koshish kijiye (ek lay me)... bura laga ho to maaf kijiyega, par shabdon me jab tak bhavnayen nahi jagengi maza nahi aayega...

Thanks sanchitji or sorry bhi
Ki humari creation aapke dil tak Na pahonch paayi. Or ha Hume bilkul bura nahi laga
Aap Hume yahi Alfazo ko bandhke Hume likh kar batao ki kaise likha jaaye inhe
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2016, 10:27:09 PM »
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Nice shikha ji aur sanchit ji ki baat par gaur kijiyega
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2016, 10:34:02 PM »
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Tum jo ho saath mere to sab kuch pyara lagta
hai,
Bin tere mere dil ka sukun bhi khoya sa  lagta hai
Tum hi to ho mere dil ki har dhadkan ki ravani,
Bin tere mere dil ka dhadkana bhi adhoora sa lagta hai
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2016, 04:11:19 AM »
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bahut khoob Shikhaa Jee. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Merey khayaal mein aap likhney ke baad, issey lafzon mein bolaa karo. Uss se aapko khud bakhud leh samajh mein aa jaaye gee.
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2016, 12:22:16 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2016, 09:34:05 PM »
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Tum jo ho saath mere to sab kuch pyara lagta
hai,
Bin tere mere dil ka sukun bhi khoya sa  lagta hai
Tum hi to ho mere dil ki har dhadkan ki ravani,
Bin tere mere dil ka dhadkana bhi adhoora sa lagta hai
bahut bahut shukriya saahill ji... aur shikha ji aap dekh sakti hain ki kis tarah saahill ji aapke sabdon ko ek sutra me piroya or kafiye me thoda sa sudhar kiya...
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2016, 09:41:02 PM »
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Or ek baat or jo surindar ji ne kahi ki aap apni rachna ko likhne ke baad ek baar padhen zarur is seaapko khud agar kuch kami hogi to samajh aayegi... shukriya and again I apologise agar aapko bura laga ho to...
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2016, 01:22:02 PM »
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Tum jo ho saath mere to sab kuch pyara lagta
hai,
Bin tere mere dil ka sukun bhi khoya sa  lagta hai
Tum hi to ho mere dil ki har dhadkan ki ravani,
Bin tere mere dil ka dhadkana bhi adhoora sa lagta hai

Thank you so much saahilji..
Aap sabse Hume bahot kuch sikhne ko milega
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2016, 01:22:58 PM »
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Bahot achey Shikha ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhai Sanchit ki baat par ghaor karen,,, hamari ghalti wohi batata hai jo hamara apna khaer'khwah (well wisher) hota hai Usual Smile

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