Tum kaho, yaa na kaho, kuchh na kuch to hai dil mein!

by abdbundeli on June 15, 2009, 07:39:22 AM
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Hamain patah hai, ki, tum ho shareek mahfil mein!
Tum kaho, yaa na kaho, kuchh na kuch to hai dil mein!
Surkh hotey ho jab bhi meyraa naam aataa hai;
Tum jahaan hotey ho, hotaa hun waheen shaamil mein!!

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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2009, 07:45:02 AM »
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bahut khub abd ji....badhiya
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2009, 08:01:01 AM »
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NICE ONE ABD JI
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2009, 08:14:42 AM »
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          GUD 1 ABD JI
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 08:28:38 AM »
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Hamain patah hai, ki, tum ho shareek mahfil mein!
Tum kaho, yaa na kaho, kuchh na kuch to hai dil mein!
Surkh hotey ho jab bhi meyraa naam aataa hai;
Tum jahaan hotey ho, hotaa hun waheen shaamil mein!!

                                - abd bundeli


bhut khoob abd ji...........bhut hi acha qita,


mehfil se wo parda uthaate nahi hain
kya raaz hai ye bhi to batate nahi hain
kis ko is dil mai sambhaal rakha hai aise
iqraar e mohabbat wo jatate bhi nahi hain
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2009, 08:59:56 AM »
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bhut khoob abd ji...........bhut hi acha qita,


mehfil se wo parda uthaate nahi hain
kya raaz hai ye bhi to batate nahi hain
kis ko is dil mai sambhaal rakha hai aise
iqraar e mohabbat wo jatate bhi nahi hain

khub kha aaina ji.....bahut badhiya
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2009, 09:11:31 AM »
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bahut khub abd ji....badhiya
Shukriyah poppoetry ji!
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2009, 09:14:35 AM »
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NICE ONE ABD JI
          GUD 1 ABD JI
Shukriyah chitralsony/shab ji!
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2009, 09:32:36 AM »
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bhut khoob abd ji...........bhut hi acha qita,

mehfil se wo parda uthaate nahi hain
kya raaz hai ye bhi to batate nahi hain
kis ko is dil mai sambhaal rakha hai aise
iqraar e mohabbat wo jatate bhi nahi hain


Shukriyah aaina ji!

Mahfil mein deed-e-yaar ki khwaahish na kareyngey!
Ham apnee muhabbat ki numaaish na kareyngey!
Woh khushkhiraam aayegaa, ham jaan jaayengey;
Milney kee, baam-e-a'am pai, koshish na kareyngey!!

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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2009, 02:12:48 PM »
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Shukriyah aaina ji!

Mahfil mein deed-e-yaar ki khwaahish na kareyngey!
Ham apnee muhabbat ki numaaish na kareyngey!
Woh khushkhiraam aayegaa, ham jaan jaayengey;
Milney kee, baam-e-a'am pai, koshish na kareyngey!!

               - abd bundeli


bhut hi khoob adb ji bhut hi achay aapke like ka to jwaab hi nhi hai..........

Deedda e yaar koi numaish nahi hai
Tehzeeb se bhatki hui koi khwahish nhi hai
Ye zikr to adaabo.n bhi mila karta hai
Nadaani si ho.n, aisi to to farmaish nhi hai

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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2009, 06:53:31 AM »
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bhut hi khoob adb ji bhut hi achay aapke like ka to jwaab hi nhi hai..........


Deedda e yaar koi numaish nahi hai
Tehzeeb se bhatki hui koi khwahish nhi hai
Ye zikr to adaabo.n bhi mila karta hai
Nadaani si ho.n, aisi to to farmaish nhi hai



Shukriyah aaina ji!

Bazm mein deykh lo, ki, deykh lo jigar-o-dil mein!
Roo-b-roo paakey gulaaboun-saa na jaauun khil mein?
Is liye deykh kankhiyoun sey guzartey hain ham;
Deed wa deed ayaan ho na jaaye mahfil mein!!

                                - abd bundeli

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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2009, 07:59:05 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji !!

Aslam Ji, very nice !!
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2009, 09:16:21 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,very nice,maza aa gayee. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2009, 11:20:48 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji !!

Aslam Ji, very nice !!
Thanks Celmira bitia!
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2009, 11:22:48 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,very nice,maza aa gayee. Applause Applause Applause
Shukriyah Madhu ji!
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