Tumhare jaise hazaar aaye. Ghazal..

by aarzoo-e-arjun on December 14, 2016, 04:31:53 PM
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आदाब

यूँ  अंजुमन  से  बेकरार आये
किसी से होकर शिकार आये

किसी  ने  ना  दी  हमें  सदायें
वहां पे  किसको पुकार आये

नशा  मुहब्बत का  है  नशीला
बिना  पिये  ही   ख़ुमार  आये

नहीं  मिटूँगा  न  कोशिशें  कर
हजा़र    देखे,    हजा़र    आये

किसी को मिलते गुलों के साये
किसी  के हिस्से में  खा़र आये

कोई भी भूखा न  सोए  या रब
सभी  को  रोटी  दो  चार आये

कभी  खुशी   को   रहे  तरसते
कभी  तो    ये   बेशुमार   आये

मुझे  मिटाने   की   हसरतों  में
तुम्हारे    जैसे    हजा़र    आये

अभी ये आलम खि़जा़  बना है
दुआ   करो   के   बहार   आये

खुदा  तो   पूछेगा  आरज़ू   को
ये  ज़िन्दगी  क्यों  गुज़ार  आये

आरज़ू -ए-अर्जुन
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2016, 09:12:43 PM »
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Bahut umdah Arjun jee waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa h.
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खुदा  तो   पूछेगा  आरज़ू   को
ये  ज़िन्दगी  क्यों  गुज़ार  आये
Aakhri line kuchh jamee nahin Khuda zindagi guzaarne ke liye hee bhejtaa hai.

Yeh zindagi kaisee guzaar aaye yaa yeh zidagi galat/theek guzaar aaye.
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2016, 07:28:25 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya sir...  Aap mujhe parhte hai...  Bas ek guzarish hai k zazbaat ko har angle se parha karein..
Fir bahut subtle raaye kayam karenge....  Likhne wale ko bhi aor seekhne ka sukh milega..



Surinder sir...  Ye zindgi ka matlab..  Bematlab, bemaksad zindgi ke baare me ishaara kar raha hun....  Aap dhyaan se nahi parhte....
Zazbaat ko har angle se dekhna chahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2016, 08:24:39 AM »
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bahut khoob waah waah
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