Uski Baatein (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on May 25, 2006, 04:22:01 PM
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Uski baatain sun kar mujh ko, waqt laga kuch thera saa,
lekin un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....

main bhi hath tham leti uska, lekin sanson per hai phera saa,
jo bhi ho un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...

raat mila woh sapno main, kuch paresha, kuch hairan saa,
keh key gaya wo aaisi baatain, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...

phool khil gaye is jeevan main, pehley tha jo viraan saa...
aaisi meethi baatain thi woh, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2006, 04:28:29 PM »
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wow SHIKHA kamal kar diya ..........veru sweet............. :D
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2006, 04:35:57 PM »
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Thanks a lot....Ranjana....so sweet of u for replying so soon....main darr rahi thi ki theek bhi likha hai ya nahi...bahut jaldi main likha hai naa, isi liye...
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2006, 04:37:36 PM »
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wow shikha nice words
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2006, 04:40:40 PM »
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kcuh baate jaldi jaldi mein kai baar bahut gahri chaap chor jaati hain........ Usual Smile u write very well .........bahut khubsurat shabdo mein ehasaso ko peeroya hai tumne...........yun hi likhti raho.....

with best wishes
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2006, 04:53:08 PM »
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Thanks a lot Kaiynath and Ranjana.
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2006, 04:58:40 PM »
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Uski baatain sun kar mujh ko, waqt laga kuch thera saa,
lekin un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....

main bhi hath tham leti uska, lekin sanson per hai phera saa,
jo bhi ho un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...

raat mila woh sapno main, kuch paresha, kuch hairan saa,
keh key gaya wo aaisi baatain, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...

phool khil gaye is jeevan main, pehley tha jo viraan saa...
aaisi meethi baatain thi woh, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....




Lovely one Shikha......kisko dedicate kia hai yeh nai bataya tumne
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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2006, 05:07:43 PM »
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Uh.....yeh batana jaroori hai kya?Huh? Anyways thanks a lot
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2006, 05:10:27 PM »
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Tumhe humne bhi apne Dil me basa rakha hai......
Tumhari mahobbat ka Diya bhare ujaale me bhi jala rakha hai......

Kardenge tujhpar harr Khushi apni Nisaar......
Khuda ke darbaar me yeh Daava rakha hai......

Apni Pyari Pyari baton se hume deewana bana rakha hai......
Shaam ke Intezar me raat ka harr pehlu apne Khwabon se saja rakha hai......

Dekho Ishq farma ke humse ek baar......
Aise kya pata chalega ki Mahobbat ki galion me kya rakha hai......!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2006, 02:50:33 AM »
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very nice Gaurav................... :D

uski baato mein jab bhi jikar mera aata hai
na jaane kyu mera dil joro se dharak jaata hai,

honth rahate hain khamosh magar.........
aankho se bayan dil ka haal ho jaata hai

dekhu na usko toh dil ko chein nahi aata
na jaane yeh kaisa bandhan hai,
na jaane yeh kaisa naata hai......

mere chehare ko woh pad leta hai aksar
mere dil mein kya hai woh yeh  jaan jaata hai

uski baato mein jab bhi mera jikar aata hai,
na jaane kyu dil mera joro se dharak jaata hai.............!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2006, 03:40:42 AM »
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Very nice work Gaurav and Ranjana.....


Ab bhi meethi batey uski,
karti hai diwanaa saa....
khwabon saa sab lagta hai,
lagta hai afsanaa saa....

karta hai intzaar mera jo, garam dopahar main,
jalta hai is shamma key sang,
lagta hai parwanaa saa....

Sang naa uska dey paugi, mujhko yeh afsos hai,
Chalak naa jaye pyar mera,
is dil sey paimanaa saa....

usko main pehchaanti hu, haal-e-dil sab jaanti hu,
lekin meri majboori sey,
woh hai abhi anjanaa saa....
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«Reply #11 on: May 26, 2006, 04:49:28 AM »
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very nice creation shikha...

koi aaya hain is oar, khidki ko khula aahista
ghuskar aayi roshni sard hawa ke saat,
dhoonde toh nahin tha koi kadmon ke nishan,
kya hain is ka marm? - Janejana


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Uski baatain sun kar mujh ko, waqt laga kuch thera saa,
lekin un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....

main bhi hath tham leti uska, lekin sanson per hai phera saa,
jo bhi ho un meethi baaton main, pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...

raat mila woh sapno main, kuch paresha, kuch hairan saa,
keh key gaya wo aaisi baatain, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa...

phool khil gaye is jeevan main, pehley tha jo viraan saa...
aaisi meethi baatain thi woh, jinmey pyar chuppa tha ghera saa....


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Shikha12
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«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2006, 06:53:36 AM »
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nice thinking...Manju ji...
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2006, 05:51:06 PM »
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Kabhi pooch ke dekho mere Dil hum tumse kitna Pyar karte hai......
Karte hai Intezaar tera Khawabon me or Din me gumsum aahein bharte hai......

Aaj jhuka ke sirr khuda se ek hee darkhast karte hai.....
Mill jaye tujhe harr Khushi jahan ki.....
Badle me uske hum Dunia ka harr Dard kubul karte hai......

Na bano tum Majboor itni....Na daro iss Jahan se......
Bas keh do ek baar tum humse ki haan sanam hum bhi tumse Pyar karte hai......

Teri koyal see meethi awaaz sunke hum Dil ki baat karte hai......
Le loon tujhe bahon me aur dekhna kaise harr Gum pighalte hai......
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«Reply #14 on: May 26, 2006, 06:01:00 PM »
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ahem ahem

kya baat hai gaurav
cha rahe ho

good going every one
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