Uski nazron se barsati chahat.....soudagar

by soudagar on August 30, 2012, 01:34:34 PM
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Mehboob par mar mitne ki wajah likh raha hoon
madhosh kar dene wali uski ada likh raha hoon

uski nazron se barsate chahat ke jaam kaa
apni aakhon mein chadhta nasha likh raha hoon

mujhe mohabbat mein bna liya usne apna khuda
mujhe tut kar chahne ki uski wafa likh raha hoon

prem ki dor mein is qadar bandh gaye hum dono
umr bhar rk duje ko chahne ki rja likh raha hoon

uski mohabbat mein is qadar doob gaya hoon "soudagar"
ek pal ki duri ko sadiyon ki saza likh raha hoon
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 02:21:15 PM »
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bahut khoob betaa keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 02:52:56 PM »
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bahut khoob soudagar ji Applause :clap:clap: ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 03:35:37 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2012, 04:31:32 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2012, 04:33:00 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!!! Very Romantic!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 04:39:24 PM »
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Mehboob par mar mitne ki wajah likh raha hoon
madhosh kar dene wali uski ada likh raha hoon

uski nazron se barsate chahat ke jaam kaa
apni aakhon mein chadhta nasha likh raha hoon

mujhe mohabbat mein bna liya usne apna khuda
mujhe tut kar chahne ki uski wafa likh raha hoon

prem ki dor mein is qadar bandh gaye hum dono
umr bhar ek duje ko chahne ki raza likh raha hoon

uski mohabbat mein is qadar doob gaya hoon "soudagar"
ek pal ki duri ko sadiyon ki saza likh raha hoon


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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 06:39:21 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
pahla misra...
bahut umda Applause Applause Applause
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Bahut hi achha likha hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 08:12:57 PM »
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bahut achhe .. Usual Smile

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shukriya saini sir .... corection nahi ho raha hai uske liye kya karein aap  batayein mujhe
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