Utraa hai aalok!

by abdbundeli on February 12, 2009, 04:37:36 PM
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Duniyaa key wyvbdhaan* sab,
Tum ko sakey na rok**!
Priya! Swaagat mein, chaturdik#,
Utraa hai aalok##!!

*   Obstructions
** Detain
#   In all the four directions
## Pleasing Light
       - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2009, 04:39:59 PM »
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Bohot pyaari lines hain Abd Ji...Very Sweet !
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2009, 04:57:47 PM »
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Very NIce ABD ji.
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2009, 05:23:55 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 12, 2009, 04:39:59 PM
Bohot pyaari lines hain Abd Ji...Very Sweet !
Shukriyah Celmira ji!
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2009, 05:24:35 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 12, 2009, 04:57:47 PM
Very NIce ABD ji.
Thanks Sophi ji!
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2009, 07:28:11 PM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Nice Lines,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 07:46:22 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob likha hai apne abd ji Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 12, 2009, 07:28:11 PM
Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Nice Lines,.
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