Wo eik abra-e-syaah, shaam-e-surkh, yeh gulshan!

by abdbundeli on September 23, 2008, 08:25:42 PM
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Wo eik abra-e-syaah, shaam-e-surkh, yeh gulshan:
B-gair aap key, mashriq kee yeh mahakatee hawaa,
Sirf beychain kar rahee hai mujhey, jaan-e-jaan!
Mein naheen jaantaa, ki, kyaa karoon, kahaan jaauun?

Khwaab-e-jannat mein, gam firaaq kaa!! Kahoon mein kyaa?
Wo koyee khushnaseeb thaa, ki, jisey aap miley!
Ye badnaseebee hai meyree, ki, ab judaa hoon mein!!

Ashk-o-gam key siwaa bachaa hai jo, wo hain aaheyn;
Yaa ki, yaadeyn hain un lamhoun keen, jab hamaarey liye,
Eik lamhey kee judaayee bhi dahar hotee thee!!

Mujh ko maaloom naheen: tum kahaan ho, kaisey ho?
Ab to, beyhtar hai, tumhain yaad na aaye meyree!!

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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2008, 10:36:26 PM »
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Abd ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2008, 09:33:23 AM »
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honeyrose ji,
Shukriyah!
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2008, 12:34:17 PM »
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Wo eik abra-e-syaah, shaam-e-surkh, yeh gulshan:
B-gair aap key, mashriq kee yeh mahakatee hawaa,
Sirf beychain kar rahee hai mujhey, jaan-e-jaan!
Mein naheen jaantaa, ki, kyaa karoon, kahaan jaauun?
Khwaab-e-jannat mein, gam firaaq kaa!! Kahoon mein kyaa?
Wo koyee khushnaseeb thaa, ki, jisey aap miley!
Ye badnaseebee hai meyree, ki, ab judaa hoon mein!!
Ashk-o-gam key siwaa bachaa hai jo, wo hain aaheyn;
Yaa ki, yaadeyn hain un lamhoun keen, jab hamaarey liye,
Eik lamhey kee judaayee bhi dahar hotee thee!!
Mujh ko maaloom naheen: tum kahaan ho, kaisey ho?
Ab to, beyhtar hai, tumhain yaad na aaye meyree!!
-   abd bundeli


Waah waah... Really very beautiful.. Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2008, 02:42:23 PM »
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Mahiya ji,

Wasl our hizra mein itnaa hi fark hotaa hai:
Wasl mein saath; magar hizra mein, bas yaad saath!
Hizra mein khushk honthh, aariz-ae-tar, chashm-ae-tar:
Wasl mein, ham-qayaam, ham-payaam, eik saath!!

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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 07:31:51 PM »
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BOhat Achche Abd Bhai, Nice One,.
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2009, 09:46:00 AM »
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Waah waah... Really very beautiful.. Applause

Thanks a lot, Shikha12 ji!
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2009, 09:48:51 AM »
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BOhat Achche Abd Bhai, Nice One,.

Thanks a lot Jaanasheen ji!
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Bahut Khoob ABD ji
mujh ko maloom nahee. tum kaha ho ..kaise ho??
bahut umda...Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2012, 08:47:53 PM »
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Bahut Khoob ABD ji
mujh ko maloom nahee. tum kaha ho ..kaise ho??
bahut umda...Applause Applause

bAHUT-BAHUT SHUKRIYAH, 'MKV' JI!
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