wo ladki....mere lab mein

by thycreator on November 15, 2007, 09:43:27 PM
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Ye uss ladki ke liye, jo har din mujhe satati hai,
har din milti hai, par kuch keh na paati hai,
Doston kaise usko apne dil ki bat main kahun,
Uss jaalim ko toh ufffff, hindi bhi nahi aati hai......tongue3


Har roz dekhta hu tumhe naino ke jharokhon se,
Har roz iss dil ko tum naye hi nazar aate ho..

Kya bat hai tere husn mein samjhaye koi mujhe,
Kyu har baar aur bekarar mujhe kar jaate ho..

Kehna chahte hai kitni batein tumse dil ki apne,
Par tum toh nigahen milane se bhi katrate ho..

Dekha hai tumhe chupke chupke mujhe dekhte hue,
Phir pas aane se mere kyu ghabraate ho..

Aise na karo, izhaar-e-dil mushkil hua jaate hai,
Kyu dil ki mere uljhano ko tum badhate ho..

Jo bat tere dil mein hai, wahi hai bat idhar bhi,
Keh bhi do usse, kyu dil ko itna tadpate ho..

Lab khamosh hain khamosh sahi, parwah kisko hai,
Nigahon se kaho kab mujhe haal-e-dil sunate ho..Winking
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2007, 10:46:47 AM »
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Kya baat hai Amit....Bohot achchi tarah jazbaton ko lafzon main piroya hai Usual Smile

All the best Winking
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2007, 12:58:07 PM »
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Amit

Himmat nahi hai kya seedhe seedhe baat karne ki :evil:

Waise ek baat hai...mazaa aa gaya tumhari rachna padh kar :wink: :D

All the best (Tallu ko to pata hoga aise kisse labs ke :lol:)
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2007, 06:29:51 PM »
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wowww good going Thy...all the very best

Kehte hain ki ishq ki zubaan nahi hoti
pyar to nazron se baya ho jaata hai
muhabbat karne vale teer-e-nazar rakhte hain
aap kitna bhi chupaiye...dil-e-bekraar ka to kooson door se pata chal jaata hai

kyun m I right?
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2007, 11:33:56 PM »
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Thanks a lot talat, raj and nikki

Nikki, aap kabhi galat ho sakti ho kya??

Monday meri meeting hai Jennifer ke sath, morning 10 am....dekhte hain kya hota hai.....Winking

Waise aaj jaate watq usne itni pyari smile di ki weekend aacha nikal jayega.....tongue3

Tumse milne ke pal ka intezaar hai hame,
Bekarar dil ko ab karar aane laga hai,

Kaisa hoga wo pal, wo halat-e-tabiyat,
Ye soch ka hi ab dil ghabrane laga hai,

Kuch aisa karna ki sukoon mil jaye mujhe,
Kai sapne ab ye man sajane laga hai,

Teri najdikiyan dhadhkane chura na le meri,
Har pal ab marne ka dar samane laga hai,

Kab aayega wo pal, intezaar ho nahi pata,
Har jata pal sadiyon sa nazar aane laga hai.. :oops:
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2007, 03:42:36 AM »
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wah wah... both of ur cration is really Good...
well expressed....
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2007, 11:34:40 AM »
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Very nice again......We are waiting for the next poem - Meeting ke  baad Winking
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: November 22, 2007, 06:49:47 PM »
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lagta hai mulakaat bahut lambi ho gayi hai....jalde se koi khabar to sunao..
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2007, 07:23:10 AM »
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Wow... Interesting... and Really Beautiful... =D> =D>

All the Best Amit... Winking
Aur haan... Now Try writing in English also... :D May be, you got a favorable reply and we get a new YoIndian Friend...  tongue3

Desperately Waiting for your next Poem...
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«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2007, 11:52:20 PM »
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Hi friends,

Thanks a lot for your support.....mujhe nahi pata tha yahan itne log wait kar rahe hai......warna pehle hi jawab mil jata....


Kaise kahen mulakat ka aalam kya hua,
Usne nigahon se mere dil ko phir chua,
Uske labz motiyon se bikharte chale gaye,
Uski muskaan yu lagne lagi jaise koi dua..

Ab toh neend na aakhon mein,
Na dil ko karar hai,
Har waqt har ghadi bas,
Ussi ka intezaar hai..

Har roz sochta hu kar du haal-e-dil bayan,
Par jajbaton ke ye shabd hue gunehgar hai..

Dar bhi hai ab toh dil mein usko khone ka har pal,
Iss dariyan-e-ishq se toh gaya saagar bhi haar hai..

Ek bechaini hai dil mein, kya karu kaho aye dost,
Haar mein jeet hai aur jeet mein bhi haar hai.... :oops:
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«Reply #10 on: November 24, 2007, 11:57:53 PM »
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Quote from: "deepika_divya"
wah wah... both of ur cration is really Good...
well expressed....


Thanks a lot deepika,

Ye toh bayan-e-dil hai, asar chod jayega,
Har dadakte dil ko aur bhi ye tadpayega,
Jisne bhi kiya pyar wo samjhega hal-e-dil,
Mera dil har dilwale se naata jod jayega.... :oops:
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2007, 01:06:53 AM »
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Very nice again......We are waiting for the next poem - Meeting ke  baad Winking


 :oops:  :oops:  :oops:

Kya kahen tumhe aye dost kya kya gawan diya,
Husn ne mujhe aaj khud ka hi kaatil bana diya,
Bade sukoon se jeete the tanha ye jindagi hum,
Uss dilkash jaalim ne muhabbat ka toffan jaga diya... :oops:
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2007, 01:10:14 AM »
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lagta hai mulakaat bahut lambi ho gayi hai....jalde se koi khabar to sunao..


Kya sunaye khabar wo jisse apni khabar nahi,
Din ki na ab chinta hai, raat ki bhi fikr nahi,
Muhabbat mein hi ab toh waqt beet jata hai mera,
Ek ghar banana hai mujhe, apni kabar nahi..... :oops:

Waqt toh dena padega na usse........ :oops:  :oops:  :oops:
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«Reply #13 on: November 25, 2007, 01:13:08 AM »
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Wow... Interesting... and Really Beautiful... =D> =D>

All the Best Amit... Winking
Aur haan... Now Try writing in English also... :D May be, you got a favorable reply and we get a new YoIndian Friend...  tongue3

Desperately Waiting for your next Poem...


Batein dil ki ho toh bhasha ki parwah nahi hoti,
Nigahen bat karti hain, shabdon ki chah nahi hoti,
Agar kashish hai muhabbat mein toh dikh jayegi,
Dilwalon ka dil aaina hai, nigaah nahi hoti............. :oops:  :oops:  :oops:
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2007, 02:59:38 AM »
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Hi friends,

Thanks a lot for your support.....mujhe nahi pata tha yahan itne log wait kar rahe hai......warna pehle hi jawab mil jata....


Kaise kahen mulakat ka aalam kya hua,
Usne nigahon se mere dil ko phir chua,
Uske labz motiyon se bikharte chale gaye,
Uski muskaan yu lagne lagi jaise koi dua..

Ab toh neend na aakhon mein,
Na dil ko karar hai,
Har waqt har ghadi bas,
Ussi ka intezaar hai..

Har roz sochta hu kar du haal-e-dil bayan,
Par jajbaton ke ye shabd hue gunehgar hai..

Dar bhi hai ab toh dil mein usko khone ka har pal,
Iss dariyan-e-ishq se toh gaya saagar bhi haar hai..

Ek bechaini hai dil mein, kya karu kaho aye dost,
Haar mein jeet hai aur jeet mein bhi haar hai.... :oops:


Amit

Wah ! Bahut khoob !

Tumhari state of mind of dekhte hue ek gaana yaad aaya :wink: :D
Poora ka poora gaana tum par fit baithta hai, magar yahan sirf kuch lines pesh kar raha hoon :D

Movie: Mohabbatein

Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo.
Hum akele, kho na jaayen,
Door tumse, ho na jaayen,
Paas aao gale se laga lo
Humko humise chura lo,
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo. :wink: :D
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