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Woh Mulaqaat Adoori thi
Qareeb the Dono ak Duje Ke
Fir Bhi Najane Kaisi Doori thi
Woh Mulaqaat Adoori thi
Khile the Armaan Dil Mea
Mano Khwaish Hui Puri thi
Dil ki Baat Dil Mea Reh Gai
Woh Mulaqaat Adoori thi
Ankhon Mea kai Sapne the
Sapno ki Bhi Majboori thi
Waqt Ko Rok Na paaye Hum
Woh Mulaqaat Adoori thi
Ab ki Baar Keh Denge Unhe
Unki Bahein Hamari Kamjori thi
Iss Mauqe ko Na Gawana Tum
Woh Mulaqaat tho Adoori thi
Divya
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 03:43:16 PM » |
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Divyaa jee:
namaste!
seedhe saral lafzoN meiN aapne dil ki baat keh dee..! umdaa'h aNdaaz-e-bayaa.n rahaa aapka... liKhate raheN aise hi! daad qabUl keejiye!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2010, 03:51:38 PM » |
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Divyaa jee:
namaste!
seedhe saral lafzoN meiN aapne dil ki baat keh dee..! umdaa'h aNdaaz-e-bayaa.n rahaa aapka... liKhate raheN aise hi! daad qabUl keejiye!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaan Dhaval Ji.. |
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 03:53:25 PM » |
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Oye Hoye.. Kis se Is Qadar Mohabbat se mil kar aa rahi ho Divya Ji.. Zara uska Naam Bhi likh deti.. !!! 
Behad Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat se Bhare Alfaaz Yahan Bikhere hain aapne.. Bahut Pyaari Kavita likhi hai.. 
**~** Mann **~**
Thank you So much Much Mann... Yea Mere Sapno ki Duniya ki Kahani hai Jahan Ak Ladka Mujhe Parehsna karta hai.. |
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2010, 04:07:04 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2010, 04:08:55 PM » |
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Thank you so so Much Khwaish ji...
Its completely Fictitious Khwaish ji... Everything can happen when you are in Dreams...
My all creation is fictitious Coz I am a Day Dreamer !
Yaa Sophi!! i will Surely Take That 
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2010, 04:09:26 PM » |
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Wah very beautiful and lovely poem you created. Nice creation. Congrat for such a powerful poem.
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2010, 04:10:34 PM » |
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Wah very beautiful and lovely poem you created. Nice creation. Congrat for such a powerful poem.
Thank you so so so Much Riyaz ji for liking my creation ! |
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2010, 04:13:59 PM » |
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Hai Sophi Kya Baat hai Aaj Kal Khumar Mein Hi Likhta Hai,.
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2010, 04:15:01 PM » |
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Hai Sophi Kya Baat hai Aaj Kal Khumar Mein Hi Likhta Hai,.
Thank you Soooo Much Azeem ! Meri Last Creation Dard Mein Di Azeem ! |
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on eTI community..
