yaadein....

by Gesu on November 22, 2005, 01:52:25 PM
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Aaj bhi hum bhoolein nahi sanam woh raatein,
Jab hum tum kiya kartey thhey kitni hi baatein,
Kya yaad hai tumhe kis tarah suntey thhey dhadkan meri,
Saansein tumhari chalke chooti thi meri saansein,
Dhadkano ke shor se goonj uthtey thhey sannatey,
Un sannatoo mein kis tarah dhoondtey they woh pal hamare,
Jahaan poorey honnei thhey rangeen sapney hamare....
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2005, 01:53:26 PM »
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nice one again, Gesu...

tanhai ki dard bhari raten
bhoole nahi hum judai ki baten
nahi hota intzar us haseen sham ka
jisme tum na rahogi tum
main na rahunga main
uff..yeh pal tab tak batao
kaise bhala hum katen. . .
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2005, 10:32:53 AM »
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thanks tinda ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2005, 10:35:55 AM »
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Kis tarah hosh aaye tum hi batado ae sanam,
Na jaane kaisa nasha sa hai har pal ae sanam,
Ho nahi tum yahaan fir bhi kyon dikhtey ho sanam,
Kya tumhara bhi haal aisa hai kaho na sanam...
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2005, 10:06:00 AM »
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nice one gesu n thanx

na jaane kya huwa hai is dil ko
kya batau sanam. .
pehle mere bas me huwa karta tha
ab nahi hai sanam. .
karta hun hosh ki baten, yeh nahi
sunta hai ay sanam. .
zara tum hi ake isko samjha do na
ay sanam. .
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2005, 11:26:04 AM »
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Samjhane se jo sambhal jaata yeh dil,
To kyon yoon hi tadapta har pal yeh dil,
Ajab si kasak anjaani si tadap
Kyon hai har pal samjhe na yeh dil
Jo samayein hain is dil mein fir bhi unhe hi
Kyon dhoondta  hai yeh dil
Paas woh na ho to tadapta hai yeh dil,
Saamne woh aa jaayein to dhadkata hai yeh dil
kitni hi baatein samet leta hai yeh dil
uljhan yeh kaisi hai samjhe na yeh dil
Kitna hi naadan hai yeh mera dil
Kaash samjhane se sambhal jaata yeh dil...
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2005, 11:29:33 AM »
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thanks tinda ji aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2005, 11:44:55 AM »
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thanks gesu, apne bahut achcha likha hai dil ke barey main.

apne dil ko samjhana hai ab to bekaar
duur reh kar nahi hota pyar ka ikraar. . .
sitam kuch is kadar huwe hai hamare bhi sath
paas ao hamare ki sang jhuum uthe ye bahaar. . .
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2005, 01:13:35 PM »
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good poetry .bahut achi shyaeri ki hai
alfaz ka intakhab acha hai

jo tum ne bakhshe unhi ratjagoon per ghaur karo
phir is ke baad meray hosloon per ghaur karo
safar ka sab se kathin moor ,aur mein tanha
bhicharne walon,meri wahshatoon per ghaur karo

take care bye
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2005, 09:26:10 AM »
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mohabbat tumhe karte hain iss baat par aitraj mat karna
humse mat kahna ki mera intazaar mat karna
yeh hume maloom hai ki tumhe humse pyar nahi
Inkar nahi kar sakte to inkar bhi mat karna
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2005, 10:34:02 AM »
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atul ji bahut khoob likha aapne. abeera jawaab nahi tumhara bhi
atul ji shayad last line mein galti se ikraar ki jagah inkaar type ho gaya hai aapse chalo kuch nahi hota ..hota hai hota hai
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2005, 02:30:26 PM »
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thanks gesu -kapoor for liking

koi achi si saza do mujhe
chalo aisa karo bhulado mujhe
tum se bichroon to maut aajaye
dil ki gehrayi se dua do mujhe

take good care
bye
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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2006, 12:48:21 PM »
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shukriya and nice ones tinda ji, abeera ji.........
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«Reply #13 on: March 09, 2009, 11:06:35 PM »
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Hmm, Sabne Bada Achcha Likha Hai, Good Job,.
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«Reply #14 on: March 10, 2009, 06:32:50 AM »
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Very Very Nice All of u. Keep writing ..........
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