Yahaan sey tumhaarey shahar jaaungee mein!

by abdbundeli on March 20, 2010, 06:58:54 AM
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Tumhaaree dagar hai: kidhar jaaungee mein?
Talab mein isee par guzar jaaungee mein!

Kaheyn log kuchh bhee: fikar mujhko kyoun ho?
Yahaan sey tumhaarey shahar jaaungee mein!

Mujhey kyaa zaroorat hai rahbar kee aakhir?
Tah-e-jaw mein ab apney ghar jaaungee mein!

Chaloongee dinon din; magar, shab key hotey,
Saraa hai tumhaaree, thhahar jaaungee mein!

Shafaq sey shafq tak sunoongee sadaayen;
Kalee hun bahaaroun ki: jhar jaaungee mein!

Thhikaaney kee parwaah, 'abd', mujhko kyoun ho?
Bahar hain haqeeqee: utar jaaungee mein!

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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2010, 07:23:03 AM »
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Wah Wah!!!

bahut Bhaut Khoob Abdji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2010, 09:52:14 AM »
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wow bahut khoob Abd ji,marvelous creation.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2010, 09:57:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2010, 03:12:35 PM »
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Wah Wah!!!

bahut Bhaut Khoob Abdji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wow bahut khoob Abd ji,marvelous creation.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob Abd Ji

Thanks a lot, khwaish ji / Madhu ji / Rajesh ji!!

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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2010, 03:24:23 PM »
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Wow.. Waah Waah Kya kahiye.. Adb ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda peshkash.. Bahoot Hi khoobsoorat andaaz se ishq bayan kiya hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Ak koshish Meri Bhi ...

Tere Ehsaas Liye hun Apne Rag Rag Mein
Teri Raah Mein Toot Kar Bhikar Jaun Main

Band hai Jo Khawaab Meri Aankhon Mea Musafir
Unn Khawabo ko hakkikat mein badal jaun Main

Ab Nahi hota Intzaar Hamse Tera ab eh Sanam
Apni har Muskarahat pe ab tera Asar paun Main

Divya !


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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2010, 03:48:08 PM »
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Wow.. Waah Waah Kya kahiye.. Adb ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda peshkash.. Bahoot Hi khoobsoorat andaaz se ishq bayan kiya hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Ak koshish Meri Bhi ...

Tere Ehsaas Liye hun Apne Rag Rag Mein
Teri Raah Mein Toot Kar Bhikar Jaun Main

Band hai Jo Khawaab Meri Aankhon Mea Musafir
Unn Khawabo ko hakkikat mein badal jaun Main

Ab Nahi hota Intzaar Hamse Tera ab eh Sanam
Apni har Muskarahat pe ab tera Asar paun Main

Divya !



Shukriyah Divya ji! 'Sundar kalpanaa' ki hai aapney!

Lab pai gul khil uthhey hain ab meyrey!
Teyree khushboo hai ab badan gheyrey!
Lakh deykhaa hai, na jaaney kahaan-kahaan jaakar:
Khoj mein roz lagey hain habeeb bahuteyrey!!

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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2010, 04:03:59 PM »
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Shukriya !

Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abd ji..

Teri Inn Shokh Adaao Ne Hame Uljaaya Hai
Warna Mohabbat ka Suroor Hame Na tha Kabhi
Teri Bahoon Ne DIya Beshumaar Pyaar Hame
Warna Iss NaseMan ne Dil Lagaya Na tha Kabhi !!

Divya
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2010, 11:54:17 PM »
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Wah Sophi ji aapne bhi kya khoob saath diya.lovely lines,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2010, 09:16:19 PM »
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Tumhaaree dagar hai: kidhar jaaungee mein?
Talab mein isee par guzar jaaungee mein!

Kaheyn log kuchh bhee: fikar mujhko kyoun ho?
Yahaan sey tumhaarey shahar jaaungee mein!

Mujhey kyaa zaroorat hai rahbar kee aakhir?
Tah-e-jaw mein ab apney ghar jaaungee mein!

Chaloongee dinon din; magar, shab key hotey,
Saraa hai tumhaaree, thhahar jaaungee mein!

Shafaq sey shafq tak sunoongee sadaayen;
Kalee hun bahaaroun ki: jhar jaaungee mein!

Thhikaaney kee parwaah, 'abd', mujhko kyoun ho?
Bahar hain haqeeqee: utar jaaungee mein!

                     - abd bundeli



Wah Wah Abd Ji
Kya Khoob Mehakta Hua Kalaam Nazar Kiya Hai
Badi Hi Khoobsurti Se Ek Ladki Ke Jazbaton Ko
Lafzon Mein Bandha Hai Aapne....
Bahut Hi Badiya Janaab.... Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2010, 06:29:59 AM »
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Shukriya !

Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Abd ji..

Teri Inn Shokh Adaao Ne Hame Uljaaya Hai
Warna Mohabbat ka Suroor Hame Na tha Kabhi
Teri Bahoon Ne DIya Beshumaar Pyaar Hame
Warna Iss NaseMan ne Dil Lagaya Na tha Kabhi !!

Divya


Shukriyah Divya ji!

Abhee to ibtidaa hai: dekhye hogaa kyaa-kyaa?
Raah-e-gulzaar-e-ishq roo-b-roo hai: chalnaa hai!
Log roye hain bahut, siskiyoun key thamney tak;
Par hamain aansuoun kaa bahar-e-gam badalnaa hai!!

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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2010, 06:33:47 AM »
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Wah Sophi ji aapne bhi kya khoob saath diya.lovely lines,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Madhu!

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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2010, 06:35:41 AM »
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Wah Wah Abd Ji
Kya Khoob Mehakta Hua Kalaam Nazar Kiya Hai
Badi Hi Khoobsurti Se Ek Ladki Ke Jazbaton Ko
Lafzon Mein Bandha Hai Aapne....
Bahut Hi Badiya Janaab.... Applause

Shukriyah HUM DUM ji!

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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2010, 12:34:15 PM »
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Bahut Khub Abd Babu
Bahut Achchey Se Ek Ladki Ke
Jazbaaton Ko Aapne Shabdon Men Piroya Hai...

Bahut Khub...


Khush Rahiye....


~Shihab~


Thanks Shihab ji! Khush Rahiye! Aabaad rahiye!!

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