Ye mohabbat hai !

by salma786 on October 01, 2010, 09:26:02 AM
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Dosto mai apni shadi ke baad ye pehla nagma likh rahi hu.... umeed hai apko pasand ayega!

Panne the jo beete lamho ke, wo hum se kho gaye,
Kuch purani thi yaadein kuch naye hogaye,
Khushiyaa hume talash kar chaukhat tak agayi,
Gam hamare ghar ka pata galti se bhula gayi!


Hawaon ka rukh yun badla hume ehsaas hi na hua,
K kab hamare naam pe Ashiyaana bana gayi,
Nazre uthate hi pehle aandhiyaan chala thi karti,
Khamoshi se rukh badal kar zindegi roshan bana gayi!

Kon kehta hai dua me andhera hi hota naseeb,
Dua -e- hi to hai jo nayi duniya saja gayi,
Ashqo ka mela humse zamane se ruth gaya hai,
Khushiyon ka karvaan khwabon ka basera bana gayi!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 09:50:22 AM »
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Bahot khoob Salma ji, achhi nazm likhi hai aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 10:40:55 AM »
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bahut khoob salma ji..
aapko shadi ki bahut bahut badhayiya..
or rab kare ki gum aapke ghar ka pata hamesha hamesha ke liye bhool jaye..
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 10:53:53 AM »
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bahut badhiya likha he apne salma jiii..likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 10:17:28 PM »
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Sabse pehle to aapki shaadi ke liye dheron shubhkaamnaayein.. wish you a very happy married life.. may god bless you with all the happiness and all your wishes get fulfilled... badhaiyaan ji badhaiyaan...

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY MARRIED LIFE

aur ab aapki kavita.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai ji aapne.. bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne ehsaason ko shabdon me utaara hai... bahut khoob...

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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2010, 11:05:42 AM »
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Bahot khoob Salma ji, achhi nazm likhi hai aapne.

Shukriya Riyaz ji
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