Zindgi Yun Basar Nahin Hoti...(Adab)

by drpandey on June 19, 2014, 09:48:33 PM
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"तेरी मुझको क़दर नहीं होती।
मेरी तुझको ख़बर नहीं होती।"  [परवाज़]

ऐसे दिलक़श ग़ज़ल कहाँ होती।
तेरी खुशबू अगर नहीं होती।
  
यूँ तो अशआर बन गए होते,
उनमें लज़्ज़त मगर नहीं होती।

कैफ़ो-रानाईयों से सजकर भी,
हासिले-पुरअसर नहीं होती।

राहते-जाँ तेरी ज़ुल्फ़ों के बिना,
ज़िंदगी मुक़्तसर नहीं होती।
 
आज-कल शाम ढल तो जाती है,
रात लेकिन बसर नहीं होती।

याद कर लूँ जो बोलती आँखें,
नींद भी बेख़बर नहीं होती।

ख़्वाब की तरह ये हकीक़त क्यूँ,
डूब कर तर-बतर नहीं होती।

अबकी बारिश में भीग कर देखें,
ज़िन्दगी यूँ बसर नहीं होती।

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मेरी ग़ज़ल ही मेरी आबरू है ..

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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2014, 09:53:23 PM »
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Waah behtareen ghazal ...lajawaab...dheron daad..
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2014, 10:00:21 PM »
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Waah behtareen ghazal ...lajawaab...dheron daad..

Tahe-dil se shukriya Bishwajeet 'Musaahib'saheb....!!

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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2014, 10:01:30 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2014, 10:14:16 PM »
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waah!!
bahut khoob pandey ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 19, 2014, 10:21:22 PM »
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Adab Sahab Aadaab ... !

Badi hi pyaari kalaam kahi hai janab ... mahboob ki purzor
aur purqulus tareef kii hai ...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Haan aik baat zaroor hume lagi ke aapne kalaam ke matle meiN jo kafiya istemal kiya hai Gazal wo dusre ashaaroN ke kafiyoN ka humshakl nahi hai...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2014, 01:02:01 AM »
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very nice......  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2014, 04:10:18 AM »
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Waaaaah bahut khoob Adab Sahib.
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2014, 11:26:25 AM »
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Waaaaah bahut khoob Adab Sahib.
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Tahe dil se shukriya Surindar.N Ji...!!

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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2014, 11:27:46 AM »
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very nice......  Thumbs UP

Thanks Jnyana Ji....!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2014, 11:31:43 AM »
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Adab Sahab Aadaab ... !

Badi hi pyaari kalaam kahi hai janab ... mahboob ki purzor
aur purqulus tareef kii hai ...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Haan aik baat zaroor hume lagi ke aapne kalaam ke matle meiN jo kafiya istemal kiya hai Gazal wo dusre ashaaroN ke kafiyoN ka humshakl nahi hai...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...

Janaab ParwaaZ sahib Aadaab....!!

Aapka aze-had shukriya aapki raay ke mutabik kuchh change kiya hai....!!

Hausla afzai ka Bahot bahot shukriya janaab...!!

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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2014, 02:24:44 PM »
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Adab Sahab Aadaab ...!

Jee aapki tarmeem change jo ki wohi hai ... kyuN ke aapne gazal kafiya phir bhi use hi kiya ... lekin ab kalaam ko matle ki kami ho gayi ... baki to aapki kalaam puri ho gayi..

Chaliye aapki kalaam ko matla dene ki koshish karte haiN ...

" mujhko teri qadar nahi hoti
Tujhko meri khabar nahi hoti "

Aapki kalaam ke ahsaas ko nazar rakhte huye abhi to humse yehi ..
Matla hua hai ...
Aapko pasand aaye toH rakh lijiye ...
Nahi toH aap koi aur matla kah dijiye ...

Likhate rahiye ... Shaad O Aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2014, 03:23:38 PM »
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bahut khub adabji

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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2014, 03:26:50 PM »
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Adab Sahab Aadaab ...!

Jee aapki tarmeem change jo ki wohi hai ... kyuN ke aapne gazal kafiya phir bhi use hi kiya ... lekin ab kalaam ko matle ki kami ho gayi ... baki to aapki kalaam puri ho gayi..

Chaliye aapki kalaam ko matla dene ki koshish karte haiN ...

" mujhko teri qadar nahi hoti
Tujhko meri khabar nahi hoti "

Aapki kalaam ke ahsaas ko nazar rakhte huye abhi to humse yehi ..
Matla hua hai ...
Aapko pasand aaye toH rakh lijiye ...
Nahi toH aap koi aur matla kah dijiye ...

Likhate rahiye ... Shaad O Aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
Parwaaz sahab Aadaab,

Bahot bahot shukriya...Nawazish...Janaab...!!
Maine aapka matla Ghazal men jod diya hai bas thode change ke saath...!!
Behad khoobsurat matla diya hai aapne...!!

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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2014, 03:38:33 PM »
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bahut khub adabji

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Bahot bahot shukriya Mann sahab......!!

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