Nahin Jaante Hain (Adab)

by drpandey on December 15, 2010, 09:19:24 PM
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Vo baade-saba hai sabhi Jaante hain.
Magar bewafa hai nahin Jaante hain.

Tarannum pe jiske sabhi jhoom uthte,
Vo kiski zubaan hai nahin Jaante hain.

Mere rooh se toodti hai jo rishta,
Ye kaisi dava hai nahin Jaante hain.

Koi dard ka taar toota hai phirse,
Jo aai sadaa hai nahin Jaante hain.

'Adab' ke zehan mein koi baat aai,
Vo kya likh gaye bas vahi Jaante hain.
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2010, 10:00:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2010, 07:14:23 AM »
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Vo baade-saba hai sabhi Jaante hain.
Magar bewafa hai nahin Jaante hain.

Tarannum pe jiske sabhi jhoom uthte,
Vo kiski zubaan hai nahin Jaante hain.

Mere rooh se toodti hai jo rishta,
Ye kaisi dava hai nahin Jaante hain.

Koi dard ka taar toota hai phirse,
Jo aai sadaa hai nahin Jaante hain.

'Adab' ke zehan mein koi baat aai,
Vo kya likhgaye bas vahi Jaante hain.


Bahut bahut Khoooob Dr.Pandeyji..

Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut Din Baad Aapke Darshan Hue Hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2010, 07:23:24 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2010, 06:18:34 PM »
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Janaab Dr. Pandey Sahab Adaab. Bahot dino ke baad aapki taza takhleeq par dafatan nazar padi to dekhta hi rah gaya. Itni khoobsurat ghazal padhkar dil lutfandoz ho gaya. Har sher ek nayapan liye hue hai jo aapki adabi liyaqat ka pataa dete  hain. Is khoobsurat ghazal ke liye aap daad o tehseen ke mustahiq hain. Meri taraf hazaron daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmayen. Mundarja ashaar mujhe sabse achhey lage.

Vo baade-saba hai sabhi Jaante hain.
Magar bewafa hai nahin Jaante hain.

Mere rooh se toodti hai jo rishta,
Ye kaisi dava hai nahin Jaante hain.

Shukriya

Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2010, 07:12:21 PM »
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Janaab Dr. Pandey Sahab Adaab. Bahot dino ke baad aapki taza takhleeq par dafatan nazar padi to dekhta hi rah gaya. Itni khoobsurat ghazal padhkar dil lutfandoz ho gaya. Har sher ek nayapan liye hue hai jo aapki adabi liyaqat ka pataa dete  hain. Is khoobsurat ghazal ke liye aap daad o tehseen ke mustahiq hain. Meri taraf hazaron daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmayen. Mundarja ashaar mujhe sabse achhey lage.

Vo baade-saba hai sabhi Jaante hain.
Magar bewafa hai nahin Jaante hain.

Mere rooh se toodti hai jo rishta,
Ye kaisi dava hai nahin Jaante hain.

Shukriya

Riyaz Ashna

Janaab Riyaz Sahab Bahot-bahot shukriya aur inayat ki aap jaise maqbool-ustad shayar ne meri haqeer si ghazal ko pasand farmaya aur apne behad khubsurat andaz se nawaza.. Aapka aze-had shukrgujaar hoon.
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2010, 07:12:36 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2010, 07:28:22 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh bhai..

Bahut khoob Pandey Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2010, 07:29:56 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji...


Bahut bahut Khoooob Dr.Pandeyji..

Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut Din Baad Aapke Darshan Hue Hai.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2010, 07:32:00 AM »
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Hausla afzai ka shukriya Shiba Ji...


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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2010, 07:34:04 AM »
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Thanks Rishi ji...Khush Rahiye..


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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2010, 02:41:32 PM »
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Bahut khoob Dr saheb ! ye doosaree gazal bhee intehai taareef kee haqdaar hai...dil se dheroN daad qubool kareN.......
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2010, 08:24:59 AM »
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Bahot bahot shukriya Mamta Ji ki aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai aur aapne apne behad khubsurat alfaazon se hausla afzai ki..


Bahut khoob Dr saheb ! ye doosaree gazal bhee intehai taareef kee haqdaar hai...dil se dheroN daad qubool kareN.......
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