इतना जाने की जल्दी न कीजिये - By "Betaab".

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इतना जाने की जल्दी न कीजिये.
दिल बेचैन है तसल्ली तो दीजिये.

मिट जाएंगी गलतफहमियां धीरे धीरे,
पहले मेरे कांधे पे हाथ रख दीजिये.

होठों से नहीं सिर्फ आँखों से शिकवा करूँगा,
सिर्फ अपनी मुस्कराहट नज़र कर दीजिये.

दिल की नाज़ुक रंगों को थामकर रखिये,
मेरी चाहत का असर होने तो दीजिये.

ये जरुरी नहीं तुम टूटकर मुझे चाहो,
बस फुर्सत में हमको भी याद कर लीजिये.

जब तन्हाईयाँ सताने लगें तुमको "बेताब",
बस इस नाचीज़ का तसब्बुर कर लीजिये.


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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2016, 12:49:34 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2016, 12:50:53 PM »
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very very niceeee.....
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Waah janab bahut hi khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2016, 07:20:38 AM »
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very nice saxena g... bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bas ek ashaar me (mujhe) ward jayada aa gaya..

ये जरुरी नहीं तुम मुझे टूटकर मुझे चाहो,
बस फुर्सत में हमको भी याद कर लीजिये.
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Bahot khooob waaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanx for the complement.
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very very niceeee.....
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Waah janab bahut hi khoob...
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bahut khoob waah waah
Thanks Saini Ji for the complement.
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very nice saxena g... bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bas ek ashaar me (mujhe) ward jayada aa gaya..

ये जरुरी नहीं तुम मुझे टूटकर मुझे चाहो,
बस फुर्सत में हमको भी याद कर लीजिये.
Thanks for the complement and correction.
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