"मेरी चाहत"

by aarzoo-e-arjun on February 24, 2016, 05:27:40 AM
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    "मेरी चाहत"

मैं लय बन जाऊँ तेरे साँसों की
तेरे इतना करीब आना चाहता हूँ।

तेरे लबों पे बिखर जाऊँ ख़ुशी बनके
मैं इस कदर मुस्कुराना चाहता हूँ।

तेरे हर आँसूं को रोक लूँ होटों पे
तेरा हर दर्द पी जाना चाहता हूँ।

तू देखे जिस ख़्वाब को ता उम्र
मैं वो ख़्वाब बन जाना चाहता हूँ।

मुझे समा लो अपनी आँखों में
मैं वहाँ बस खो जाना चाहता हूँ।

जो ख़ुश्बू महकाती है तेरे बदन को
मैं वो खुशबू बन जाना चाहता हूँ।

तेरी जुबाँ से जो भी शब्द निकलें
मैं उनका हर्फ़ हो जाना चाहता हूँ।

तू बिछड़े अगर तो लड़ पडूँ ख़ुदा से
संग तेरे हर लम्हा जीना चाहता हूँ।

तू संग मेरे तो जन्नत की परवाह नहीं
तेरे संग लिपट के मर जाना चाहता हूँ।

गर मिला ख़ुदा तो यही कहूँगा उसे
मैं हर जनम में तुझे पाना चाहता हूँ।


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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2016, 05:32:50 AM »
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Bahot khooob chahat hai janab waaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2016, 06:38:11 AM »
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Great...very nice..
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2016, 01:18:10 PM »
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kya baat hai Arjunji....wah...
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2016, 02:44:01 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2016, 10:42:52 PM »
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Bahut hee umdah waah, dheron daad w/ Rau (rau baad mein miley gaa).
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मुझे समा लो अपनी आँखों में
मैं वहाँ बस खो जाना चाहता हूँ।
This is a fine sher but still if I was writing it I would write it as under:

Mujhey tumh samaa lo apnii aankhon mein...
Ke main wahan bas jaanaa chaahtaa hoon!
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2016, 05:10:35 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya janab mohan g.. aapne meri poetry ko dhyaan se parha..
aor mujhe aapka suggestion bhi kubool hai ...
maine bas usse bahar me likhne ki koshish ki thi... isliye "tum' ward ko repeat nahi karna chahta tha...

mujhe aapke suggestion ki hamesha jaroorat hogi... plz aap aise hi mujhe update karte rahiyega...

aapka chotta baccha

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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2016, 09:04:47 PM »
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Bahut hee umdah waah, dheron daad w/ Rau (rau baad mein miley gaa).
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मुझे समा लो अपनी आँखों में
मैं वहाँ बस खो जाना चाहता हूँ।
This is a fine sher but still if I was writing it I would write it as under:

Mujhey tumh samaa lo apnii aankhon mein...
Ke main wahan bas jaanaa chaahtaa hoon!
Baad waalaa Rau main ne add kar diyaa hai.
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