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by nirala on February 03, 2011, 09:53:17 AM
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kal raat aankhen bhar aai
jaane thi wo kaisi tanhai

ro na paaya chahkar bhi
fir bhi aankhe thi dabdabai

mehfir me hasta muskurata hardum
muskurahton se chupata apna har gham

patthar dil bhi kahlaata
kabhi anjaano ka bhi apna ban jaata

kya hua achanak fir kal aur kyun
aankhen na thi pahle kabhi nam yun

jaane thi wo kaisi tanhai
aankhe meri bhar aai
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 10:38:40 AM »
mast likha hai nirala mastana ji..
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 10:48:32 AM »
bohut acha niraala ji bas khawab mein hi aankehin nam kijiye ga haqqeeqt mein nirala hasta acha lagta hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 10:53:34 AM »
ehesaas achha laga .......
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 10:53:57 AM »
ab aaplogo ka thanx.
lekin shayd ab haqeeqat me aana hoga.
mera mazak kisi ko bura bhi lag jaata hai na
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 11:02:43 AM »
bahot aacha likha he nirala ji.........touchy words......good
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 11:26:09 AM »
wah niralaji kya baat hai..... ek ehsas jo dil tak jata hai.... bahut khub....

islie kar rahe mushkurane ki koshish,
ki mahfil main aankhe chhalak hi na jayen.
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 11:28:30 AM »
Mast poem hai aapki Niralaji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kuchh tou hui hai baat
Jo aankhein bhar aayee

Warna ess tanhaai se tou
Roz ki hai aapki sagaayi

Jaroor koi anjaana mila hai
Jis ka dard tune sunna hai

Bas usske he ehsaason ne tujhko
Ess kadar tanhaa tadfayaa hai


kal raat aankhen bhar aai
jaane thi wo kaisi tanhai

ro na paaya chahkar bhi
fir bhi aankhe thi dabdabai

mehfir me hasta muskurata hardum
muskurahton se chupata apna har gham

patthar dil bhi kahlaata
kabhi anjaano ka bhi apna ban jaata

kya hua achanak fir kal aur kyun
aankhen na thi pahle kabhi nam yun

jaane thi wo kaisi tanhai
aankhe meri bhar aai

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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 11:31:08 AM »
Matrix yaara aapka sukriya--actually kal raat sahi me meri aankhe achanak se paani se bhar gai--aur rone ka b dil kiya lekin Nirala nahi rota h Usual Smile
mene agr thk se likhta to ye bahut dardila hota--jo mere saan ke khilaaf hai.
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thanx
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2011, 11:33:39 AM »
Manju ji aapka bhi thanx aur aapne kamaal ki real 2 lines likhi hain good.
Koyal ji aapka reply to mast hai aur shayd sachh bhi.
thanx
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2011, 11:41:35 AM »
kal raat aankhen bhar aai
jaane thi wo kaisi tanhai

ro na paaya chahkar bhi
fir bhi aankhe thi dabdabai

mehfir me hasta muskurata hardum
muskurahton se chupata apna har gham

patthar dil bhi kahlaata
kabhi anjaano ka bhi apna ban jaata

kya hua achanak fir kal aur kyun
aankhen na thi pahle kabhi nam yun

jaane thi wo kaisi tanhai
aankhe meri bhar aai



dur kardun mai teri tanhai
aaja ban ke tu aankhon me rubai

tere dil se teri dhadkan chura lun
aur bahaon me leke kardun teri chumai

tere khwabon me , teri sanson me mai hi rahon
aisa ho jaye tu ban jaye mera aur mai mai banu teri lugai

hahahahahaha

sry just kidding
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 01:11:58 PM »
haye Raahi ji---
itna khubsurat jawaab dia yar.
kaash tum ladki hi hote Usual Smile
abhi ke abhi line maar deta 2-4 baar Usual Smile
umda comnt re---me ko achha laging
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thanx
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 01:16:50 PM »
touchy one nirala ji......
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nirala
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 01:19:17 PM »
thanx Ishq ji
Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 01:26:53 PM »
Itnaa Gambhir kaise ho gaye Bhai ... ! ek rachna me hansaate ho aur dusre meN udaasi ... kya baat hai ... Nirala ji ! aise hi likhte rahen ... dil se daad !!!!!!!!!
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